Peace
A simple poem about something big.19 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good spiritual verse.
Nicely written and the message is strong and clear.
The picture is a good match.
Thank you so much for sharing this one with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good spiritual verse.
Nicely written and the message is strong and clear.
The picture is a good match.
Thank you so much for sharing this one with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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You're welcome, Sharon. Thank you for the review!
Tina
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Like your work here as peace is such an eluding concept in this day and age. Both external and internal peace are in short supply all round. What with wars and terrorism and every such thing! So here's to peace and prosperity for years to come! Cheers
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Like your work here as peace is such an eluding concept in this day and age. Both external and internal peace are in short supply all round. What with wars and terrorism and every such thing! So here's to peace and prosperity for years to come! Cheers
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the look at my poem about this elusive thing, peace. I like how you pointed out the two kinds of peace. Yes, both are needed!
Thanks for the review!
Tina
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Thank you for the look at my poem about this elusive thing, peace. I like how you pointed out the two kinds of peace. Yes, both are needed!
Thanks for the review!
Tina
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It was such a good piece of poetry Tina. Keep writing!
Comment from Carl DeVere
"Yeah verily...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of Death...I will fear no evil." This reminds me of that...one of my favorite quotes for inspiration. I'm not certain if we never doubt...like Thomas. But even doubt is an illusion and overcome by Faith.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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"Yeah verily...though I walk through the valley of the shadow of Death...I will fear no evil." This reminds me of that...one of my favorite quotes for inspiration. I'm not certain if we never doubt...like Thomas. But even doubt is an illusion and overcome by Faith.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I loved your comments. Yes we do doubt, but deep down we really know He is who He says He is. That verse really does relate. Thanks for quoting that!
Tina
Comment from Teri7
Tina, Thank you for the very well written and very true poem you have penned about peace that comes from the Lord, Jesus. You used great words and great art work and scripture. Thank you for sharing my friend. I needed this tonight! love and blessings,Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Tina, Thank you for the very well written and very true poem you have penned about peace that comes from the Lord, Jesus. You used great words and great art work and scripture. Thank you for sharing my friend. I needed this tonight! love and blessings,Teri
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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You ate welcome, Teri.
I needed it today, too!
Gods so good to always give us peace!
Hope you're doing well:)
Tina
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You ate welcome, Teri.
I needed it today, too!
Gods so good to always give us peace!
Hope you're doing well:)
Tina
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Please say a prayer for me today. The devil is a liar and the father of lies. love and blessings, Teri
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Yes ma'am. I will do it now!
Lets defeat that liar.
Thank you for asking me.
Just remember how TRUE
God is.:)
Hugs and prayers!
Tina
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Thank you so much Tina! I thank God for you! love, Teri
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Aw, Teri. I just saw this. I
am thankful for you! Your love
for Christ is refreshing and
beautiful!
May you feel loved,
Grateful me:)
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I feel the same about you my friend. It is amazing when we truly love Him people seem to come into our life that love Him also.
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That's so true! We are
sisters after all! There's just
such an easy bond with others
that love the Lord. It doesn't
happen with every Christian, but you're right. He puts people
where they are needed!!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is wonderful, Tina. First off I got a big charge from the bird. I'm a fan of those little critters.
Peace is best and you have in four well composed stanzas stated it clearly to match Matthew 18:3.
This made me smile so thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is wonderful, Tina. First off I got a big charge from the bird. I'm a fan of those little critters.
Peace is best and you have in four well composed stanzas stated it clearly to match Matthew 18:3.
This made me smile so thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Gloria for the nice comments and review:)
I appreciate your thoughts!
Tina
Comment from lyenochka
Great message, Tina. You're right that we have that peace in the Lord! And I think you made a new poetic form. Did you just make it up? Or does it already have a name? If not, you should name it - Meditation poem with the focus word as one word that starts each 6 line stanza and the rhyme scheme is xabcdd.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Great message, Tina. You're right that we have that peace in the Lord! And I think you made a new poetic form. Did you just make it up? Or does it already have a name? If not, you should name it - Meditation poem with the focus word as one word that starts each 6 line stanza and the rhyme scheme is xabcdd.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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You are the second person to suggest that!
I just made it up as I went along. I will look into naming it if it's not already a thing:) Thanks for the idea!
Tina
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Thank you, Tina, for this beautiful expression of the peace that only Jesus Christ can give. Unfortunately for me, the anxieties of my human emotions overwhelm me often, and it's hard to experience His peace, prevailing over all. I appreciate this well written reminder of its simplicity.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Tina, for this beautiful expression of the peace that only Jesus Christ can give. Unfortunately for me, the anxieties of my human emotions overwhelm me often, and it's hard to experience His peace, prevailing over all. I appreciate this well written reminder of its simplicity.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I hear you:) I was just talking to my cousin about her anxiety. We had a long talk about how even Christians who depend on God have anxiety problems and need medicines. I am not promoting meds...I am just saying I understand how you feel, and I am sorry you have to deal with it. I will
your emotions calm and God sends you extra peace whenever you need it.
Hugs!
Tina
Oh yeah! Thanks for the review!:)
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Thanks Tina for the hugs and your message of support. I appreciate your friendship and fellowship in Christ ❤
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I so appreciate you too!
We need to help each other
run the race!:)
Hugs and prayers,
Tina
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So true, Tina. Thank you! xoxo
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Welcome!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a loving format, Tina -- you should use a few more times and define it so that others may follow!! ;) Its employment here is very effective and I thoroughly enjoyed -- be sure to 'wow' us again soon!! ;) :) If I had a six it would be yours for originality and testimony -- please accept my humble virtual6!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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What a loving format, Tina -- you should use a few more times and define it so that others may follow!! ;) Its employment here is very effective and I thoroughly enjoyed -- be sure to 'wow' us again soon!! ;) :) If I had a six it would be yours for originality and testimony -- please accept my humble virtual6!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Did you get my thank you? It isn't showing up now, on my end...
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I am not seeing my reply, so..take 2!...
Thank you so much for this review, and suggestion to play with the form some more and give this format a name. I just might do that, and call it the tinette! That sounds kinda cool! I will take the virtual six and treasure it:)
Tina
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Perfect!
Comment from Sally Law
This is a simple but big poem. When we see God love for us combined with His caring way, we are rested in our peace, unruffled and undisturbed. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear Tina. A fine offering of epic proportions.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is a simple but big poem. When we see God love for us combined with His caring way, we are rested in our peace, unruffled and undisturbed. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear Tina. A fine offering of epic proportions.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I replied to this earlier but it isn't showing, so...Thank you for your offering of encouragement, sweet Sally! I appreciate it!
Rested in His peace,
Tina
