Peace
A simple poem about something big.19 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
A cleverly constructed poem with a repeating two part form, separated by a refrain that undergoes a subtle change at the poem's half-way point. This was so well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A cleverly constructed poem with a repeating two part form, separated by a refrain that undergoes a subtle change at the poem's half-way point. This was so well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you. That means a lot coming from you. I'm just a relatively new poet...its taken me forever to say I am a poet!...so thank you so much for the encouragement:(
Tina
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Peace, finds the inner sense that is sought and seldom found before the soul leaves the world to its peaceless existence.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This poem, Peace, finds the inner sense that is sought and seldom found before the soul leaves the world to its peaceless existence.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Peace is sought after in all the wrong places. The world, you are correct seems peaceless! Thank you for the review:)
Tina
Comment from Fonda Little
I couldn't agree more! Loved the picture you used! As I tell other Christian poets on here, it does my heart wonders to see others using their gift to Glorify God! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I couldn't agree more! Loved the picture you used! As I tell other Christian poets on here, it does my heart wonders to see others using their gift to Glorify God! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I am with you. I love seeing God glorified on here!
Thank you so much for the review! We can only get peace from one place...and it's free! I had to write about it!
May He always be praised on here as He deserves!
Tina
Comment from Mastery
Hi Tina. How have you been? So sorry I have missed so much of your writing. good tom read this fantastic poem. sorry I have no sixes left because it is certainly worthy. God bless you. Bob
ps. Are you still a fan of mine? :) Bob
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Tina. How have you been? So sorry I have missed so much of your writing. good tom read this fantastic poem. sorry I have no sixes left because it is certainly worthy. God bless you. Bob
ps. Are you still a fan of mine? :) Bob
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I have been okay with God's help!💗I haven't gotten your stuff lately! I wondered where you were. Let me check my fan list!
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Thank you for the review! Are you my fan too?:)
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of course. LOL That's why I recieve notices everytime you post new work. It comes to my mailbox. You didn't read my current post that is why I asked you. (: You mean you didn't realize that ? :) Bob
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Any peace we can achieve on our own is shallow, incomplete, and fleeting. True, lasting peace--as your fine poem says--comes only from the Lord.
The style of your poem is appealing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Any peace we can achieve on our own is shallow, incomplete, and fleeting. True, lasting peace--as your fine poem says--comes only from the Lord.
The style of your poem is appealing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Oh Janice...you nailed it. You went one step firther than I did. Peace we try to construct does not last.
This is a new form I made up, because I wanted to put a question in the middle, because it popped into my brain. Thank you for the nice review:)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Tina. This is a fine poem. Peace through Him is the way to go. These are the best lines for me:
"Peace
free to all who ask
changes you inside
yes, it can, can't it?
only He can provide
peace to heart applied"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Hi Tina. This is a fine poem. Peace through Him is the way to go. These are the best lines for me:
"Peace
free to all who ask
changes you inside
yes, it can, can't it?
only He can provide
peace to heart applied"
Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you again, Marilyn for reading this poem also! It is a quirky form I kinda made up to suit all the thoughts that bounce around my head:)
Have a great day please:)
Comment from Patty Palmer
No matter where you are! No matter what you've done. Ask the Lord to forgive you and you can become a child of God. He has so much to offer here on Earth as in Heaven. Be sure you mean it because His love cannot be bought or bartered for. Even if it was for sale, no one could have enough money!!
I love your poem!
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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No matter where you are! No matter what you've done. Ask the Lord to forgive you and you can become a child of God. He has so much to offer here on Earth as in Heaven. Be sure you mean it because His love cannot be bought or bartered for. Even if it was for sale, no one could have enough money!!
I love your poem!
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Patty,
You hit it spot on...what a great summary! Peace is precious gem...fake gems don't do any good, huh?
Thank you for reviewing this:)
Tina
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You're welcome!!
Patty
Comment from Bichon
You have clearly documented your faith in this well written poem. I like how you expressed your desire for peace, something we are all in dire need of. Lovely bird picture too.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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You have clearly documented your faith in this well written poem. I like how you expressed your desire for peace, something we are all in dire need of. Lovely bird picture too.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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The thing about peace...we have to ask every time we need it. I ask a lot, lol. I trust Jesus more than I trust my ability! Thank you for reviewing and for the nice comments:)
Tina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Peace is one of those things in life that we take for granted if we have it and soon complain if it leaves, your poem is faithful and soulful Tina, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Peace is one of those things in life that we take for granted if we have it and soon complain if it leaves, your poem is faithful and soulful Tina, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Dolly...yes! It is easy to take it for granted and stress over stuff. I do that, and then I remember...oh yeah, God...you take the stress ...I trade it for peace!
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about peace that can not be bought with all the money in the world. It is free from Jesus when we have faith. Our souls will find the peace despite the chaos around us.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A very well-written poem about peace that can not be bought with all the money in the world. It is free from Jesus when we have faith. Our souls will find the peace despite the chaos around us.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Isn't it amazing that something so valuable cannot be bought?? Yes...our souls can have peace with chaos around. It doesn't make sense, but that's our great God! Have a great day, friend!
Tina
