Comment from zanya

Excellent

These two pieces of Art written and visual seem like they were made for each other - how well they reflect each other -the poem exploring effectively purpose of life here on earth

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments....

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Author,
You've written an excellent poem for the abstract art contest
that, in a straightforward way, turns the abstraction to
concrete paths that determine direction.
"Free will line was given to me
making the right choice is the key."
Choosing the spirit line is core to destiny.
Excellent rhymes and meter with the bold coloring and font.
Well done
Best wishes to you
Robert

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review...

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You've done a great job with this poem, the aabb couplets work well, with a natural rhythm for flow.The words "lines of life" have triggered an uplifting line of spiritual thought for you to follow.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments....

Comment from Alchera

Good

A good written felt poem throughout its built construction rhymed format layout, flow, refrain.and spiritual narrative storylined content.
Some missing punctuation is necessary.

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...

Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt

Excellent

Your poem the Lines of life was entreating and interesting to read. the color scheme and picture elevated the theme. I thought it was a really good entry for the abstract art contest.

Good Luck.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings....

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

What a lovely, faith filled poem. I enjoyed the rhyme and meter. I made for a very smooth, melodic read. I loved this line :'a seed, an heir of Abraham'. Well ell done.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...Blessings

reply by Minglement on 23-Jan-2020

You are very welcome. Good luck.

Comment from Supe

Excellent

Very nice piece, flowing smoothly from start to finish. The title is perfect as mentioned throughout. The vibrant colours add to this abstract art poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and best wishes....

reply by Supe on 23-Jan-2020

you are welcome.

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

A moving poem speaking of the powerful truth of creation and a loving God who loves us and desires nothing more than to spend an eternity with us, His children. I like the artwork you chose to define this poem. It works well.
Well done. No errors noted.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.....

Comment from innmint

Excellent

I liked the artwork you chose to go along with your poem. It looks like Heaven shining through the darkness. I loved the colors you chose as well. Beautiful work! Thank you.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thank you for your review and kind comments.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful and inspirational poem that matches the outstanding Abstract art work you chose. Excellent repeating lines to draw the reader into the piece.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thank you for your review and very kind comments.