Faith
A Poem about faith8 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
'Cross my Heart and Hope not to Die by Knife?'
Reminds me of my suicide attempt December 1st 2006 almost 14 years ago.
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This is a Faith Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Good luck with this Meia!
Ricky
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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'Cross my Heart and Hope not to Die by Knife?'
Reminds me of my suicide attempt December 1st 2006 almost 14 years ago.
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This is a Faith Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Good luck with this Meia!
Ricky
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a well-written poem. Dark, but it describes what's going through a person's mind in their final seconds. Your artwork is beautiful, perfect for your poem, nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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What a well-written poem. Dark, but it describes what's going through a person's mind in their final seconds. Your artwork is beautiful, perfect for your poem, nicely done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I believe that moments of darkness are when some find the most faith.
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your Poem Faith seems to fit the syllable structure. The picture works very well with the poem. I don't have any criques to make. I think your poem is a great faith contest entry.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Your Poem Faith seems to fit the syllable structure. The picture works very well with the poem. I don't have any criques to make. I think your poem is a great faith contest entry.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much that means alot.
Comment from Pantygynt
Two statements on faith here. the first positive, the second less so with a hint of self harming in moments of doubt. In your note you state the last line as having eight syllables. I can only find seven so perhaps this needas some attention.
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"Faith - comes - in - mo-ments - of - doubt."
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Two statements on faith here. the first positive, the second less so with a hint of self harming in moments of doubt. In your note you state the last line as having eight syllables. I can only find seven so perhaps this needas some attention.
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
"Faith - comes - in - mo-ments - of - doubt."
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for noticing that. It seems I left a word out. It should have said "Faith comes in our moments of doubt."
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Through excellent use of this very concise form, you have conveyed a powerful message about how desperation and near-death can lead to an awakening of faith.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Through excellent use of this very concise form, you have conveyed a powerful message about how desperation and near-death can lead to an awakening of faith.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Sasha
This is superb and I wish I had a 6 left to give you for this one. It is beautifully written and conveys a powerful message. This is the first Clarity Pyramid I have read and like the style very much. I wish you all the best in this Faith Poetry Contest entry. Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is superb and I wish I had a 6 left to give you for this one. It is beautifully written and conveys a powerful message. This is the first Clarity Pyramid I have read and like the style very much. I wish you all the best in this Faith Poetry Contest entry. Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you Sasha. I am glad you like it,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A deeply personal write that in a wonderful presentation takes the depth of the word 'Faith' and weaves it through to the core of who we are...where it touches the darkness and brings it back into the light! ;) Thanx for sharing a piece of your heart and best of luck in the contest! ;)
P.S. Just a little something to consider: perhaps the word 'Belief' instead of "Believe"... suggestion only, the offering is awesome and unique! ;)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A deeply personal write that in a wonderful presentation takes the depth of the word 'Faith' and weaves it through to the core of who we are...where it touches the darkness and brings it back into the light! ;) Thanx for sharing a piece of your heart and best of luck in the contest! ;)
P.S. Just a little something to consider: perhaps the word 'Belief' instead of "Believe"... suggestion only, the offering is awesome and unique! ;)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much
