Safe To Remember
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Visions"Writing for healing
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Comment from scongrove
Sorry for the five stars, I'm all out of sixes, although, I think you deserve a ten. I think you are so brave for sharing your story and allowing us to see your past. It takes so much courage to let others in. I know I have a hard time with that myself.
I especially like the ending of your chapter. I love the word FREE! I know how it feels to finally be free of darkness and lies.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Sorry for the five stars, I'm all out of sixes, although, I think you deserve a ten. I think you are so brave for sharing your story and allowing us to see your past. It takes so much courage to let others in. I know I have a hard time with that myself.
I especially like the ending of your chapter. I love the word FREE! I know how it feels to finally be free of darkness and lies.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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HEyI am so grateful for the review and five stars. I appreciate you wanting to give a six. They are limited and I know there are some amazing writers ( like yourself) on here that you have to spread the stars between! It's ok. Thank you for reading! Hugs XX
Comment from robyn corum
Bec,
Your dad sounds like a really cool guy who was willing to support and encourage you why you most needed it. That's awesome. So many girls don't have that in life. I am sooooo sorry you are having to go through this.
I AM happy that your dad has had a good, long life and that he has followed his heart, been happy in love and helped others to love the Lord. That's something to be proud of. *smile* No matter what happens.
Some notes
1.) It was just more of, 'Do better and it wil)l) be better'.
2.) I cried, 'Daddy can I move with you(?)
3.) He sweet(-)talked me and the next thing I knew, we (were) headed
4.) headed to a movie and stayed overnight at a (h)otel.
--> you'd only cap if you were saying something like Ramada Inn or Motel 6, etc
5.) I was in tears all the way back to my friend(')s house.
6.) I have fond memories of him calling my (apartment where) I would
--> good for you!
Great chapter! Sorry to be so late in reading!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Bec,
Your dad sounds like a really cool guy who was willing to support and encourage you why you most needed it. That's awesome. So many girls don't have that in life. I am sooooo sorry you are having to go through this.
I AM happy that your dad has had a good, long life and that he has followed his heart, been happy in love and helped others to love the Lord. That's something to be proud of. *smile* No matter what happens.
Some notes
1.) It was just more of, 'Do better and it wil)l) be better'.
2.) I cried, 'Daddy can I move with you(?)
3.) He sweet(-)talked me and the next thing I knew, we (were) headed
4.) headed to a movie and stayed overnight at a (h)otel.
--> you'd only cap if you were saying something like Ramada Inn or Motel 6, etc
5.) I was in tears all the way back to my friend(')s house.
6.) I have fond memories of him calling my (apartment where) I would
--> good for you!
Great chapter! Sorry to be so late in reading!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Hey, good to see you. I am so grateful that you catch all of my mistakes. I need your eyes on my work, but I'm sure you get tired of fixing them. LOL. Sorry. I'm trying to be careful and catch them all. I will go and fix those right now. Have a great day. P.S.Got amazing news about Dad. I'll be posting in in the next couple of days. but a sneak peek for you..he'shome and has been given years to live now instead of months! GOD IS GOOD!! :-DD
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STOP IT! That is amazing news!
I have been so afraid this was not going to end well. THANK YOU!!!!!!
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Thank you for your prayers and support!! I got such an anointing when I rad your reply! :)) Blessings to you today!
Comment from Carl DeVere
Wow! This is very fresh, current and relatable. It feels like listening to some private confession-- and are being complemented by the intimacy offered. Your faith, wonder, and pondering are well felt and understood. It's a pity that you have suffered such bad patterns in men.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Wow! This is very fresh, current and relatable. It feels like listening to some private confession-- and are being complemented by the intimacy offered. Your faith, wonder, and pondering are well felt and understood. It's a pity that you have suffered such bad patterns in men.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I am so happy to hear this. I always cringe a little when I see that I have reviews, I just never know how it is going over. Thank you for telling me this. It means so much.
Thank you for the five stars. Blessings
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I always cringe a bit too, no matter how many good comments I've had. You never know how it's going to go over. But that should not stop you.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting tribute to your father, who was always there for you, and who is now dying of cancer. You also tell the story of an abusive boyfriend and reveal your relationship with god through prayer.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is an interesting tribute to your father, who was always there for you, and who is now dying of cancer. You also tell the story of an abusive boyfriend and reveal your relationship with god through prayer.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Susan. I am grateful that you read and reviewed my work. It means so much to me. Thank also for the five stars. Hugs
Comment from Fonda Little
Great job! I pray that writing this was therapeutic for you! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Great job! I pray that writing this was therapeutic for you! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much! Amen indeed!
Thank you for reading and for the five stars.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Oh man, I am floored. Really? THANK YOU!! I still have a hard time believing that I have talent, but I will try and believe you. :) I hope I go miles as a writer too.
Appreciate this encouraging review and five stars! Blessings
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Yes, really! Just keep opening up like this, always write your heart out and there is no reason why you cannot go far. I am only just starting as well and I know there is a long way to go yet but all I can do is to keep believing and trust my talent and hone it with hard work. For that is all we can ever do.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I hate cancer too it already took 2 people that I love the most. In away when my dad passed away last year after fighting it for 3 years, I was hurt. when the priest told us that God was kind to him when he took it away. Now looking back, I finally understood: the pain he was going through was excruciating, so God in his great mercy forgive me and took him in heaven. I will pray for your dad and whatever God decided please don't lose hope.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I hate cancer too it already took 2 people that I love the most. In away when my dad passed away last year after fighting it for 3 years, I was hurt. when the priest told us that God was kind to him when he took it away. Now looking back, I finally understood: the pain he was going through was excruciating, so God in his great mercy forgive me and took him in heaven. I will pray for your dad and whatever God decided please don't lose hope.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Oh I am truly sorry for your loss. It. is. so. hard. I covet your prayers.
I hope I offer some help to you through my writing. Thank you for sharing with me. I appreciate the review and five stars so very much! Hugs and blessings to you.
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Be strong my friend, God sees your struggle and pain, and it will comfort you when you least expect
