Monet's Fantasy
A Terzanelle16 total reviews
Comment from Phoenix Rising
What a lovely and beautiful poem June. Excellent poetic flow and construction. Truly my pleasure to read and review. Also wonderful artwork to frame this poetic expression.
Phoenix Rising
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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What a lovely and beautiful poem June. Excellent poetic flow and construction. Truly my pleasure to read and review. Also wonderful artwork to frame this poetic expression.
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. And I do appreciate the generous stars!
Comment from Sally Law
This took me to another time and place. I love the era of long skirts and parasols. How lovely this is, June. A beautifully penned and illustrated poem.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This took me to another time and place. I love the era of long skirts and parasols. How lovely this is, June. A beautifully penned and illustrated poem.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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So glad you enloyed this period piece. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes I was going to say your poem reminded me of a villanelle and then I see it is a combination of two forms.
The needlework done by the girl is a perfect motif to highlight her other positive attributes. Impressionism is good, although I'd bet it would be more difficult to needlework abstract artwork.
Excellent poem, and a pleasure to read and review June. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Yes I was going to say your poem reminded me of a villanelle and then I see it is a combination of two forms.
The needlework done by the girl is a perfect motif to highlight her other positive attributes. Impressionism is good, although I'd bet it would be more difficult to needlework abstract artwork.
Excellent poem, and a pleasure to read and review June. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your thoughts on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Sugarray77
Awesome! Your verse and all its parts are splendid and so well written. I love it and think the complicated forms make this a definite six. Great job June!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Awesome! Your verse and all its parts are splendid and so well written. I love it and think the complicated forms make this a definite six. Great job June!!
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! It was a new format I wanted to try. Thank you for the feedback and generous rating!
Comment from w.j.debi
Your style and words complement the theme of your poem about a girl who is kind and gentle. Your poem flows smoothly, and your repeating lines fit in well to the flow.
This is the first terzanelle poem I've run across. Thank you for introducing me to a new form.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Your style and words complement the theme of your poem about a girl who is kind and gentle. Your poem flows smoothly, and your repeating lines fit in well to the flow.
This is the first terzanelle poem I've run across. Thank you for introducing me to a new form.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sketch of a marvelous lady is vividly descriptive--praising her physical beauty, her many talents, and her goodness--compassion and
lack of arrogance.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Your sketch of a marvelous lady is vividly descriptive--praising her physical beauty, her many talents, and her goodness--compassion and
lack of arrogance.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned in the terzanelle form. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned in the terzanelle form. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written terzanelle about a person with many good characteristics but the most outstanding trait she has is her kindness that takes her close to perfection.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A very well-written terzanelle about a person with many good characteristics but the most outstanding trait she has is her kindness that takes her close to perfection.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this terzanelle! I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine villanelle/Terza river combination June, finely written and a joy to read. Just one spag below:
"(An) angel could not have a sweeter voice."
Did women like this really exist? I expect those who were protected from the outside world may have been this innocent and then when they marry they find out what life is really like.
Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A fine villanelle/Terza river combination June, finely written and a joy to read. Just one spag below:
"(An) angel could not have a sweeter voice."
Did women like this really exist? I expect those who were protected from the outside world may have been this innocent and then when they marry they find out what life is really like.
Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the heads up on the typo! The woman described in this terzanelle does not exist - except in Monet?s mind. That?s why I called his fantasy. lol I appreciate your stopping by to read and share your insights.
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Monet was such a romantic x
Comment from Iza Deleanu
with parasol embellished in white lace she walks caring the joy of life - A gentle soul, she has the softest touch. Thank you ir sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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with parasol embellished in white lace she walks caring the joy of life - A gentle soul, she has the softest touch. Thank you ir sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this terzanelle! I?m glad you enjoyed it.
