It's Your Future
A 3-Line Poem22 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
Your point is well-taken. Denying one's past is is counterproductive (unless, perhaps, revealing that past would open old wounds, and result in dreadful consequences (such as those in 'Les Miserables,' the original soundtrack of which, I chanced to listen to yesterday. But that kind of thing seldom happens, so I still believe denying one's past to be
counterproductive, nevertheless).
Good luck in the three-line poem contest, Kahpot!
:)
Don
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Your point is well-taken. Denying one's past is is counterproductive (unless, perhaps, revealing that past would open old wounds, and result in dreadful consequences (such as those in 'Les Miserables,' the original soundtrack of which, I chanced to listen to yesterday. But that kind of thing seldom happens, so I still believe denying one's past to be
counterproductive, nevertheless).
Good luck in the three-line poem contest, Kahpot!
:)
Don
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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OK I must agree occasionally secrets may have their place, I like your comparisons, thank you for this wonderful review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
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Yoiuare very welcome, Kahpot.
Comment from Bichon
I really liked the contrast description with the half mast, it is a very clever idea that worked well. Your poem is full of wise and true advice that many should remember. my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I really liked the contrast description with the half mast, it is a very clever idea that worked well. Your poem is full of wise and true advice that many should remember. my friend.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your great review and comments, much appreciated
Comment from Gloria ....
So true because all of our life is the entirety of our essence. A profound meaning stated with clarity.
A pleasure to read and review and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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So true because all of our life is the entirety of our essence. A profound meaning stated with clarity.
A pleasure to read and review and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review and wishes, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from xvi
Wow. I like the idea here or recognizing that which comes before and how that has a hand in what which will come. This poem is ominous. It is a warning and it has the tools needed to avoid an unwanted outcome. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Wow. I like the idea here or recognizing that which comes before and how that has a hand in what which will come. This poem is ominous. It is a warning and it has the tools needed to avoid an unwanted outcome. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your great review and wonderful comments, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Barbaraj1
What a great poem you have written. It's only three lines but it is powerful.
One can't or should not deny the past. We must learn from our past. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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What a great poem you have written. It's only three lines but it is powerful.
One can't or should not deny the past. We must learn from our past. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your great review****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short verse has a strong and clear message.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short verse has a strong and clear message.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review, much appreciated
Comment from Gail Denham
Yes, that is true. Now we see this with the "megxit" situation - Harry and Meghan. Sadly they will find out it's not so friendly and easy in our world. Harry's been pampered, raised up to believe he's elite. An education awaits him.
Good poem - we are who we are.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Yes, that is true. Now we see this with the "megxit" situation - Harry and Meghan. Sadly they will find out it's not so friendly and easy in our world. Harry's been pampered, raised up to believe he's elite. An education awaits him.
Good poem - we are who we are.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much, yes they are going to see the real world, much appreciated
Comment from Mark D. R.
IMHO too many persons during the Vietnam War era denied a reality you poignantly expressed in a few words. Your selected photograph is a reminder of that.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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IMHO too many persons during the Vietnam War era denied a reality you poignantly expressed in a few words. Your selected photograph is a reminder of that.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for this excellent review, much appreciated
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, kahpot.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count and
use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The message is a good
one, and the comparison
to "flying half mast" is also good.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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-Good image and
presentation, kahpot.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count and
use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-The message is a good
one, and the comparison
to "flying half mast" is also good.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your great review and comments, much appreciated
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
So very true that our past does affect our future. How can it not? The past makes us who we are and tells us where to go from here.
"Keep right on writing!'
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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So very true that our past does affect our future. How can it not? The past makes us who we are and tells us where to go from here.
"Keep right on writing!'
Patty
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
