Death of my Star
Glowing brighter and brighter...9 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
A wonderful poem about a dying star. You have said a lot in three short lines. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck. I like the artwork.
Barbara
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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A wonderful poem about a dying star. You have said a lot in three short lines. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck. I like the artwork.
Barbara
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for liking my poem and the artwork.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sad the death of your star. But closing your eyes and resting is like lovingly letting it go when it comes to its turn to die out. The star, though dark now, will remain glowing brightly in your heart.
Patty
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Sad the death of your star. But closing your eyes and resting is like lovingly letting it go when it comes to its turn to die out. The star, though dark now, will remain glowing brightly in your heart.
Patty
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind words on this poem. And yes that's overall what I strove to aim for in terms of its meaning.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt three-line poem about our dying star that will appear as a bright white light which we should follow to find the eternal life entrance gates.
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A very well-written heartfelt three-line poem about our dying star that will appear as a bright white light which we should follow to find the eternal life entrance gates.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful short poem along with the image it gives the reader with this great artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a beautiful short poem along with the image it gives the reader with this great artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of going to sleep, following a star.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of going to sleep, following a star.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
That's such a deep, wonderfully written poem. I love how you can say so much using so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I really like the image you chose for this one.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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That's such a deep, wonderfully written poem. I love how you can say so much using so few words. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I really like the image you chose for this one.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Thank you for finding my poem well-written and full of imagery in three lines.
Comment from w.j.debi
Short, sweet and to the point. There is a sort of comfort in the words you have chosen. Just close your eyes and go with the flow to a wonderful rest. It has a gentle tone to the thought, so peaceful.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Short, sweet and to the point. There is a sort of comfort in the words you have chosen. Just close your eyes and go with the flow to a wonderful rest. It has a gentle tone to the thought, so peaceful.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for thinking so. :)
Comment from Alyssa Weisbrod
I love this. The three lines manage to have a sort of gravity to them that is hard to get just right but you have managed that with this poem. I wish you the best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I love this. The three lines manage to have a sort of gravity to them that is hard to get just right but you have managed that with this poem. I wish you the best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for thinking so of this poem. It's difficult as you say to capture this much emotional gravity in a haiku.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful fantasy offering for the three-liner... great use of metaphor on the 'universal' scale... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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A wonderful fantasy offering for the three-liner... great use of metaphor on the 'universal' scale... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
