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Pride and Syllable

Dialogue Only Contest Entry

35 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your dialogue is creatively composed, well-detailed, entertaining, and
amusing. Yet, it does address some of the issues that come up on this site. By the way, I was born quoting Shakespeare! LOL!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Janice. I'm so glad you enjoyed this satire and contest entry. When I read all the poetry on FanStory, I think your boast is totally plausible.{Winks.}
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Cybertron1986
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I adore the relative humor here. It's a great read to begin the day. I think many writers here, to some degree, can imagine ourselves in this scenario at one point in time with fanstory members and friends. Love that "four star" rating line. Hahahahaha Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Cyvertron. I'm so glad my contest entry gave you a good belly laugh. We need to laugh more these days.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Funny little rant :"Let me think. Arrest, imprisonment, and the ruination of my good name?

I'm not really sure, but I do know you'll sleep better." And good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    That's exactly what this is, a funny little rant. I am so pleased you enjoyed this, Iza. Sending you my best today as always, and many thanks for the excellent review,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Perfect! This is so funny! I love how you not only incorporated the struggle with syllable count but also plagiarism too! Great idea for this dialogue only! :)
xoxoxo

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    It's funny how a four-star review can take on a life of its own. It seems to hold mighty power. I'm delighted if this made you smile.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxoxo
reply by Diana L Crawford on 20-Jan-2020
    Yes, a great read to start my day (when I'm actually supposed to be working - shh!) haha!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Sally. This is a fun story. Syllable counthais broken up many friendships. I use the finger tap method for counting syllables. It works pretty well.
I think the discussion that ensued endangered a friendly relationship. It seems to me poets and writers will fight over words and syllables more than money. HAHA.

Z


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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Oh, I do love to make you laugh my dear Z. I appreciate the excellent review and kind comments so much. Sending you my best today as always, Sally :))
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 20-Jan-2020
    You're welcome.