Searching for One Another
A sedoka contest offering9 total reviews
Comment from Phoenix Rising
A delightful charming little piece. The brief conversation between the clover and the seeker. Alas I have never found a 4 leaf clover. But I will always listen for their subtle call. ;-)
Thanks for sharing and a pleasure to review.
Phoenix Rising
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A delightful charming little piece. The brief conversation between the clover and the seeker. Alas I have never found a 4 leaf clover. But I will always listen for their subtle call. ;-)
Thanks for sharing and a pleasure to review.
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thanx for dropping by, Phoenix -- always good to hear from you! ;) This was a fun little write, and I'm glad you enjoyed! ;) Take care and have an awesome week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Hi Yvette! I get it! That's so cool... I've never seen that form before. Who's been coming in with the Japanese poetry? I love the two different views. You did a great job MLLOTS! :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Yvette! I get it! That's so cool... I've never seen that form before. Who's been coming in with the Japanese poetry? I love the two different views. You did a great job MLLOTS! :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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LOL! If I told you the real story behind this one, you probably wouldn't believe it... ;) :) So good of you to drop by for a little 'four-leaf clover hunting', my friend!! ;) :) I'm afraid I'm 'behind' again, but I probably won't be caught up any time soon.... just gonna be content riding in the back of the caravan for a while - LOL! ;) Thanx again for the shiny stars and take care up there! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Minglement
Nice entry for this contest. I liked the alliteration, first thing it was two people (four arms). Took a second read but it was a nice switch to see what the subject was. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Nice entry for this contest. I liked the alliteration, first thing it was two people (four arms). Took a second read but it was a nice switch to see what the subject was. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Twas fun to mix clovers and love - we'll add it to the list of unlikely couples! Thank you for your review!
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Lol - you're welcome ;)
Comment from May 1
That's such a wonderfully written poem and a great writing prompt entry, I think. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I wish more people could find a four-leaf clover.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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That's such a wonderfully written poem and a great writing prompt entry, I think. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I wish more people could find a four-leaf clover.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much, May, and here's to finding much luck this week!
Comment from Kathleen S.
Creative and well written... a very timely poem for Valentine's Day. Brilliant and intriguing. Good artwork to go with your poetry - it brings life to your words.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Creative and well written... a very timely poem for Valentine's Day. Brilliant and intriguing. Good artwork to go with your poetry - it brings life to your words.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much, Kathleen!
Comment from shaffer40
I love this poem. I like the back and forth of the seeker and the sought. I used to search for four-leaf clovers in Western Pennsylvania as a kid, but I'm not biased. :) -- It's well done; I wouldn't give it six stars if it were not.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I love this poem. I like the back and forth of the seeker and the sought. I used to search for four-leaf clovers in Western Pennsylvania as a kid, but I'm not biased. :) -- It's well done; I wouldn't give it six stars if it were not.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much for such an awesome review and for those wonderful stars!! I, too, am a four-leaf explorer of both past and present - welcome to the club, my friend!
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Thank you -- and, you're welcome.
Comment from Tina Crute
This may be the first poem, ever, to be spoken by a four-leaf clover! How unique and super-creative. I like the underlying theme of not giving up, but searching with faith that what you search for is there.
Lovely contest entry!
Tina
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This may be the first poem, ever, to be spoken by a four-leaf clover! How unique and super-creative. I like the underlying theme of not giving up, but searching with faith that what you search for is there.
Lovely contest entry!
Tina
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhh.... I talk to them all the time, you know... and they talk back... LOL!! :) Thank you for your wonderful review, Tina!
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I should try it. I will tell you what they say to me!
You're always welcome!
Tina
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Great use of your syllables in making the Sedoka. You managed to paint in my mind, myself in a field of clover, trying my best to find that (no pun intended) lucky charm.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Great use of your syllables in making the Sedoka. You managed to paint in my mind, myself in a field of clover, trying my best to find that (no pun intended) lucky charm.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Hunting for the prized four-leaf clover was great fun as a kid. But they were always so hard to find. And when I did find one, they never brought me any extra good luck! Nice poem and I like the picture too.
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hunting for the prized four-leaf clover was great fun as a kid. But they were always so hard to find. And when I did find one, they never brought me any extra good luck! Nice poem and I like the picture too.
Patty
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your great review!
