Starlight
A Lune24 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have followed all of the requirements for a 5-3-5 lune.
Your picture was a great choice for this poem.
Best of luck in the lune contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I believe you have followed all of the requirements for a 5-3-5 lune.
Your picture was a great choice for this poem.
Best of luck in the lune contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering of a clear, night sky... Great intensity for just 13 syllables here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A beautiful offering of a clear, night sky... Great intensity for just 13 syllables here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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And thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from juliaSjames
Your words describe a starfilled sky with beautiful economy of expression. I live in a city so I don't see the full glory of the heavens very often. But I saw the image you projected in my mind's eye.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Your words describe a starfilled sky with beautiful economy of expression. I live in a city so I don't see the full glory of the heavens very often. But I saw the image you projected in my mind's eye.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great & thanks for reading - so sad our beautiful night skies are getting more difficult to see ! zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune about the stars in the sky that shine like gemstones in the night sky of a winter night. A great picture to complement your lune perfectly.
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A very well-written Lune about the stars in the sky that shine like gemstones in the night sky of a winter night. A great picture to complement your lune perfectly.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt.
This short verse tells of stars shining as gemstones.
Well written, and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt.
This short verse tells of stars shining as gemstones.
Well written, and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from June Sargent
I love the imagery of celestial gemstones shining in the night sky! In just a few short lines, you've painted a scene that captures the essence of a beautiful winter evening. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I love the imagery of celestial gemstones shining in the night sky! In just a few short lines, you've painted a scene that captures the essence of a beautiful winter evening. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Gail Denham
Good lune. I like the "gemstones" - that is what they look like as they sparkle in the heavens. And brighten our winter nights. We had a full moon here a few days ago. I guess it had a name - can't remember. but lovely.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Good lune. I like the "gemstones" - that is what they look like as they sparkle in the heavens. And brighten our winter nights. We had a full moon here a few days ago. I guess it had a name - can't remember. but lovely.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A most enjoyable review to read zanya
Comment from Therese Caron
Lovely Lune. I love Celestial gemstones. This is a beautiful poem, wonderful words, and the stunning image complements your words very well. Good luck in the contest!
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Lovely Lune. I love Celestial gemstones. This is a beautiful poem, wonderful words, and the stunning image complements your words very well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A stunning picture of gleaming stars at night. In summer we have stars that shine like this; they sparkle as the lightning bugs put on their show of glitter. See you at the polls.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A stunning picture of gleaming stars at night. In summer we have stars that shine like this; they sparkle as the lightning bugs put on their show of glitter. See you at the polls.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
I enjoyed reading this short but elegant little poem. The picture is a very fitting complement to the words. Best of luck in the contest and in your ongoing creative writing efforts.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed reading this short but elegant little poem. The picture is a very fitting complement to the words. Best of luck in the contest and in your ongoing creative writing efforts.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
