Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

So often this can happen Trisha and I know someone close to me who feels like this and there is no reversing the process, once the heart has suffered like this, then it takes so much love to nurture it back to health, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

That's the interesting form of poetry, this tanka poetry. Seems to be an antithesis of the upcoming holiday of Valentine's day, I found the fresh cool iciness somewhat of a pleasurable treat however, as I hope I don't sound too trite or like someone who watches too much TV but I was enjoying a refreshing York peppermint Patty well I read your cool poetry. Think this is a coincidence? I have not only a sweet tooth that won't quit, but also I'm a devoted chocoholic. I would like to share with you that I now have nine days clean and sober or was it 10 I have overcome my addiction at this point and will keep you updated as to the status of my sobriety of which you have been a partaker

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

reply by Badger_29 on 25-Jan-2020

14

reply by Badger_29 on 25-Jan-2020

15

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020

Great - You CAN do thIs 😊

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020

Keep progress going - stay away from pushers and.ANY supply. Your brain testing you for strength. It?s looking for its fix - you can win

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020

Keep progress going - stay away from pushers and.ANY supply. Your brain testing you for strength. It?s looking for its fix - you can win

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Tanka. Sometimes live turns into hate. The unconditional love is gone and we can only see the faults of the other and they irritate the daylights out if you.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Tanka Poetry contest.
The short verse has a clear message of love turning to hate.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh I do wish I had a six,this is a winner for sure.
You did a great description in this tanka and the count is spot on and still the content is consistant.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very unique employment of the tanka, Trisha -- good job on such an impactful offering!! I would suggest the following for impact/presentation, but please feel free to ignore. :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

rejected or abused. --> rejected or abused...

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Jeffrey Ford

Excellent

You have an amazing poem! It well written, and it is very relatable. Many people have received heartbreak throughout their lives. Reading this poem can help people with the healing process. Fantastic poem!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a very supportive review, hugs Trisha

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like the message of this. I don't think that this is a good condition to be on the receiving end of. This is a bad condition for the heart to get in. The only help is the hope and Grace of God helping you. This is good and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020

Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha