A Liberated Wife
Womens lib60 total reviews
Comment from zanya
It's a beautiful sensible portrayal of a life lived as a married couple - compromise essentially which is the way all partnerships work- despite what many 'progressives ' would have us believe today !! thanks for sharing
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It's a beautiful sensible portrayal of a life lived as a married couple - compromise essentially which is the way all partnerships work- despite what many 'progressives ' would have us believe today !! thanks for sharing
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written, Jay. In all lives a little rain will fall and marriage is an agreement that sometimes involves a few disagreements along the way.
Very nicely written in your fine lyrical voice and excellent rhythm and rhymes.
Gloria
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Very nicely written, Jay. In all lives a little rain will fall and marriage is an agreement that sometimes involves a few disagreements along the way.
Very nicely written in your fine lyrical voice and excellent rhythm and rhymes.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from Minglement
Oh I love the sweet content and gentle flow of this tender poem describing a marriage. You cover both the highs and lows and always come back to harmony. Well done.
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Oh I love the sweet content and gentle flow of this tender poem describing a marriage. You cover both the highs and lows and always come back to harmony. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes, that is the right way. It is pleasing to know that many couples are so compatible and understanding. The poem says a lot in a very gentle manner. I enjoyed the reading. So well written.
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Yes, that is the right way. It is pleasing to know that many couples are so compatible and understanding. The poem says a lot in a very gentle manner. I enjoyed the reading. So well written.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from emmaysavage
I very much like your take on liberated and your description of a Marriage. The rhyme and rhythm fits the theme. In your second stanza, shouldn't "Through" be Though"?
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I very much like your take on liberated and your description of a Marriage. The rhyme and rhythm fits the theme. In your second stanza, shouldn't "Through" be Though"?
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from royowen
I was moved by the affect it has on the proceeding generation. I think my kids are comforted by the fact that my wife and I are still together, which I think helps with their own determination to keep their marriage together. A beautifully written ballad style poem my friend, you have done a good thing, blessings, Roy
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I was moved by the affect it has on the proceeding generation. I think my kids are comforted by the fact that my wife and I are still together, which I think helps with their own determination to keep their marriage together. A beautifully written ballad style poem my friend, you have done a good thing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This sounds like the kind of poem about marriage that would work most effectively as an introduction to being kind in a marriage relationship. I could hear it in church very easily. I love this stanza:
My husband leads in many ways,
but often leans on me.
Through mutual sharing is our goal,
we sometimes disagree.
Thank you for a super post!
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This sounds like the kind of poem about marriage that would work most effectively as an introduction to being kind in a marriage relationship. I could hear it in church very easily. I love this stanza:
My husband leads in many ways,
but often leans on me.
Through mutual sharing is our goal,
we sometimes disagree.
Thank you for a super post!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really beautiful Jaybird. In this day in age, many households are out of order because of women's lib or women's rights movements. The man is suppose to be the head and lead the household, not in a tyrannical manner, but, the way the Bible declares it to be. In many households, the woman is trying to lead and tell the man what to do. She is sometimes placed in an unnatural position because the man won't work, let alone lead the household. Your wife was a gem and I'm sure that she's greatly missed. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
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This is really beautiful Jaybird. In this day in age, many households are out of order because of women's lib or women's rights movements. The man is suppose to be the head and lead the household, not in a tyrannical manner, but, the way the Bible declares it to be. In many households, the woman is trying to lead and tell the man what to do. She is sometimes placed in an unnatural position because the man won't work, let alone lead the household. Your wife was a gem and I'm sure that she's greatly missed. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Another bombshell of a poem from jbird1. I think it is something we married couples don't do too much anymore, communicate and work together for the common good of the family.
Thanks for sharing.
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Another bombshell of a poem from jbird1. I think it is something we married couples don't do too much anymore, communicate and work together for the common good of the family.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
This is quite a nice poem wonderfully written. I think it tells quite an interesting real-life tale and that's great. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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This is quite a nice poem wonderfully written. I think it tells quite an interesting real-life tale and that's great. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
