A Liberated Wife
Womens lib60 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing
the notes and the poem, jaybird.
-I think mutual sharing is
a very good thing in a marriage.
-A good verse about the
children and family dynamic
as well as a very good concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing.
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-Thanks for sharing
the notes and the poem, jaybird.
-I think mutual sharing is
a very good thing in a marriage.
-A good verse about the
children and family dynamic
as well as a very good concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
An interesting view of marriage. Yes the Lord blesses marriage with children and a happy life. Your rhyme and rhythm were perfect for this piece. I notice that none of your poems comes without an image. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
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An interesting view of marriage. Yes the Lord blesses marriage with children and a happy life. Your rhyme and rhythm were perfect for this piece. I notice that none of your poems comes without an image. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Jay,
Another great rhymed and metre poem full of rich understanding of marital relationship. However, may I suggest one slight change. To maintain the cadence:
The tender harmony we share
() an even greater plus.
Regards
Reg
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Dear Jay,
Another great rhymed and metre poem full of rich understanding of marital relationship. However, may I suggest one slight change. To maintain the cadence:
The tender harmony we share
() an even greater plus.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Liberated Wife, has a good meter and finds the happy marriage that exists behind the flare ups, let downs, and other bad days that only matter with friends and lovers.
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This poem, A Liberated Wife, has a good meter and finds the happy marriage that exists behind the flare ups, let downs, and other bad days that only matter with friends and lovers.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from Tina Crute
Yes sir...this married couple enjoys harmony and an even keel, rare in today's world. Your rhyme is sing-song and flows smoothly through the brain, sort of like your stable and happy marriage.
Tina
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Yes sir...this married couple enjoys harmony and an even keel, rare in today's world. Your rhyme is sing-song and flows smoothly through the brain, sort of like your stable and happy marriage.
Tina
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is what most couples would be happy to be able to say this about their marriages. It's a wonderful feeling to be able to say their marriage was lived as the Lord intended. And all parents are proud to be able to say their children learned respect and honor. I like the poem and I would be proud to say that I was a liberated wife.
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This is what most couples would be happy to be able to say this about their marriages. It's a wonderful feeling to be able to say their marriage was lived as the Lord intended. And all parents are proud to be able to say their children learned respect and honor. I like the poem and I would be proud to say that I was a liberated wife.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautiful write, flawless in its rhyming rhythm and articulate premise - truly a superb write in its even and unforced, rhyming movement - a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this marvelous declaration by a happy wife...
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In my opinion, a beautiful write, flawless in its rhyming rhythm and articulate premise - truly a superb write in its even and unforced, rhyming movement - a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing this marvelous declaration by a happy wife...
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from RShipp
There are so many times that the one leading in a relationship is not the focal point of the relationship.
Your life seems to have been a blessed life.
Your title was perfect!
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There are so many times that the one leading in a relationship is not the focal point of the relationship.
Your life seems to have been a blessed life.
Your title was perfect!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from Ogden
Convincingly misleading, to appear as if spoken by a female narrator.
You still have what it takes after all these years, Jay!
Wishing you good fortune, especially good health,
Don
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Convincingly misleading, to appear as if spoken by a female narrator.
You still have what it takes after all these years, Jay!
Wishing you good fortune, especially good health,
Don
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
A poem that shows the true meaning of marriage give-take, life, children, respect, agreement, harmony, open eyes not all things are as bad as we think them to be if we grow all along the way. We do, do the Lord's will which is Life, Truth, & eternal life in Himself. giovanni
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A poem that shows the true meaning of marriage give-take, life, children, respect, agreement, harmony, open eyes not all things are as bad as we think them to be if we grow all along the way. We do, do the Lord's will which is Life, Truth, & eternal life in Himself. giovanni
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
