My Heart Is Ablaze
my contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from May 1
That is so beautifully said, such a wonderful sentiment and so wonderfully woven into a poem. It paints such a perfect picture in my mind. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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That is so beautifully said, such a wonderful sentiment and so wonderfully woven into a poem. It paints such a perfect picture in my mind. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from jaded831
Excellent 3 line poem. It has a theme you can't go wrong with, yet it delivers something special. I can visualize the scene, and feel the fire within. Great job. I hope to be writing more, now that my broken ankle, has healed.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Excellent 3 line poem. It has a theme you can't go wrong with, yet it delivers something special. I can visualize the scene, and feel the fire within. Great job. I hope to be writing more, now that my broken ankle, has healed.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review. I a, g;ad your ankle is healed.
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Thank you.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your love poem in this short form. It captures the intensity of the emotion by contrasting the "quiet" with the "blaze". And the picture seems to vibrate in response as well! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I admired your love poem in this short form. It captures the intensity of the emotion by contrasting the "quiet" with the "blaze". And the picture seems to vibrate in response as well! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a delicate feeling of comfort and joy when your hearts keeps company to the loved ones. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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What a delicate feeling of comfort and joy when your hearts keeps company to the loved ones. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely poem meets the prompt guidelines. Your 5-7-7, addressed to your significant other is very romantic and appealing. The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Your lovely poem meets the prompt guidelines. Your 5-7-7, addressed to your significant other is very romantic and appealing. The artwork is the perfect accompaniment.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from lyenochka
Well done 5-7-7 poem, Patricia and you get the contest rules perfectly addressing a loved one whose head is peacefully resting on the narrator's shoulder.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Well done 5-7-7 poem, Patricia and you get the contest rules perfectly addressing a loved one whose head is peacefully resting on the narrator's shoulder.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from forestport12
Such great word choices with so few chances to get it right. Much harder than most folk would understand to fuse so much emotion and thought into so few words. I like how it reminded me of that song that goes, "You say it all when you say nothing at all."
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Such great word choices with so few chances to get it right. Much harder than most folk would understand to fuse so much emotion and thought into so few words. I like how it reminded me of that song that goes, "You say it all when you say nothing at all."
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautifully written entry for this 3 Line Poetry contest. It has perfect syllable count and vivid description of true love ablaze. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest. I love the artwork you chose to illustrate this one too.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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This is a beautifully written entry for this 3 Line Poetry contest. It has perfect syllable count and vivid description of true love ablaze. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest. I love the artwork you chose to illustrate this one too.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from juliaSjames
This is a warm romantic offering for the contest. Perfect syllable count. Excellent mental and emotional depictions. I admire the use of ablaze in connection with passion and a fire on a cold night.
Lovely, heartfelt work. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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This is a warm romantic offering for the contest. Perfect syllable count. Excellent mental and emotional depictions. I admire the use of ablaze in connection with passion and a fire on a cold night.
Lovely, heartfelt work. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about setting a heart ablaze for a special person in our lives we need a shoulder of someone strong to contact comfort us on a quiet night.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about setting a heart ablaze for a special person in our lives we need a shoulder of someone strong to contact comfort us on a quiet night.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your lovely review.
