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a lune

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Comment from Tina Crute
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This is powerful. There may be a snake in that picture, and if so, it should be shown. I like this poem for its profound statement, societal check-up, and all around great weaving of a lesson and a gentle warning.
Tina

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    I mean, c'mon..can we get one sliver of truth these days? Not just the favorable optics some people crave. jeez, the struggle continues, sigh.
    Cheers
reply by Tina Crute on 18-Jan-2020
    All I can say is Yep!
    Tina
Comment from Susan X Smith
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I must say I find the meaning of this poem a bit obscure. The notes mention the women's march but I did not see evidence of that in the lines of the poem. Anyway I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Hi Susan, thanks for the review. There is an exposition at the National Archives showing Woman's struggle in the past 100 years. There is a poster from a 1913 march with women suffrage, and a poster of the famous woman's march in 2017 after the trump Inauguration.
    This keeper of archives have seen fit to blur anything relating to trump or woman's anatomy, altering the truth of the day.
    The truth is the truth, regardless of how brutal and unsavory.
    The struggle continues, haha sigh, Cheers.