Scale Squared
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Comment from Sally Law
It is said that our entropy of the world increases with time. I believe it it is so in your room of reminiscing and in all things. The longer we remember, the deeper the understanding.
Sending you my best today for this introspective poem as always. This is so uniquely you and artfully illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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It is said that our entropy of the world increases with time. I believe it it is so in your room of reminiscing and in all things. The longer we remember, the deeper the understanding.
Sending you my best today for this introspective poem as always. This is so uniquely you and artfully illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate our communication. I also painted the picture. Love, Doug.
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You are very talented, Doug. Poetry and painting go together. Sal :))
Comment from rspoet
Hello Doug,
Remembrances are as real as objects to the one remembering them
and also have the advantage of being portable. They go with us to
each place along the journey, and, yes, they can change the light
from glare to halo.
I suppose that's why dates, markers in time, as well as places have
such power.
Excellent poem.
Best wishes and reminises to you
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Hello Doug,
Remembrances are as real as objects to the one remembering them
and also have the advantage of being portable. They go with us to
each place along the journey, and, yes, they can change the light
from glare to halo.
I suppose that's why dates, markers in time, as well as places have
such power.
Excellent poem.
Best wishes and reminises to you
Robert
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Robert. Let's enjoya new year. Doug
Comment from GWHARGIS
I do like the meter of this. I could breathe between lines and the simple lines made me think. Sometimes we overthink poetry. Memories are like that. Your poem was very enjoyable. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
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I do like the meter of this. I could breathe between lines and the simple lines made me think. Sometimes we overthink poetry. Memories are like that. Your poem was very enjoyable. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Gretchen. That was nice of you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about memories of images of the past come back to the mind every time when we start to relax. We suddenly realize everything worked together to get us where we are.
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A very well-written poem about memories of images of the past come back to the mind every time when we start to relax. We suddenly realize everything worked together to get us where we are.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is obscure and deeply personal, as reminiscences always are. Our personal space will cocoon us as we wish.
"Happiness resides within my room as I sit with abstractions and brush": are you an artist?
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Your poem is obscure and deeply personal, as reminiscences always are. Our personal space will cocoon us as we wish.
"Happiness resides within my room as I sit with abstractions and brush": are you an artist?
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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A wanna be artist, yes. I did paint the picture. Thank you. Doug
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Doug.
-I like your poem,
the imagery, and thoughts
as you reflect about this room.
-It sounds like a place
where you can be comforable
with your thoughts.
-I like the color imagery
and the last verse, especially
the last line.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Doug.
-I like your poem,
the imagery, and thoughts
as you reflect about this room.
-It sounds like a place
where you can be comforable
with your thoughts.
-I like the color imagery
and the last verse, especially
the last line.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Yes, that's true. Thank you. I did paint the picture.
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You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing. A lot of poets are now sharing their own art. I cannot paint or draw anything, but I love writing about them. I have one about a painting to post in the near future. If you are interested, I will let you know.
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Absolutely. Please do.
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Will do!
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, I don't mind if you write it that way, sometimes rules are meant to be broken. A lovely whimsical poem. No errors and it floated down the page, a melancholy poem about the past and its affect on the 'now'. Your room offers you solace, and I found that an appropriate image in the end lines. The poet serenely brushing. Nice job with this one, Eve.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Hello, I don't mind if you write it that way, sometimes rules are meant to be broken. A lovely whimsical poem. No errors and it floated down the page, a melancholy poem about the past and its affect on the 'now'. Your room offers you solace, and I found that an appropriate image in the end lines. The poet serenely brushing. Nice job with this one, Eve.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I believe your interpretation is approximately, or really, as I intended. Thank you. Doug
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our memories are forever with us and we are reminded of them by the objects in our room and when we are alone we flash back to times we enjoy remembering, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Our memories are forever with us and we are reminded of them by the objects in our room and when we are alone we flash back to times we enjoy remembering, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
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Yes. Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You are allowed to take artistic liberties. Very nice reminiscences can quell the loneliness or emptiness at times. We can't erase what is engraved in our minds, we can only hope to enjoy what we remember.
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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You are allowed to take artistic liberties. Very nice reminiscences can quell the loneliness or emptiness at times. We can't erase what is engraved in our minds, we can only hope to enjoy what we remember.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Yes, that's true. Thank you.
