Never a Greater Love!
A poem of thanksgiving for what Jesus did for all of us!70 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Interesting interpretation of John's quotation. I love the presentation with the yellow font on purple background. Well done simple and direct. Thank you for sharing with us this unique piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Interesting interpretation of John's quotation. I love the presentation with the yellow font on purple background. Well done simple and direct. Thank you for sharing with us this unique piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Poet,
Inspiring? Yes. Uplifting? Yes. A great 5-7-5? Yes.
But Haiku? No.
I am no expert in this form, but I believe that Haiku is normally about nature.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Dear Poet,
Inspiring? Yes. Uplifting? Yes. A great 5-7-5? Yes.
But Haiku? No.
I am no expert in this form, but I believe that Haiku is normally about nature.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Badger_29
I wanted this six stars because of its content it's message, and its accuracy to the format for which this is portrayed. This is an important message that should be shared for Thanksgiving and the Christmas holiday but are you around this is a very relevant and real message. I feel honored to be part of the fellowship here at fanstory.com, and have been thoroughly and riched by the vein of spirituality which runs through here. And honor and a pleasure to write with you here.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I wanted this six stars because of its content it's message, and its accuracy to the format for which this is portrayed. This is an important message that should be shared for Thanksgiving and the Christmas holiday but are you around this is a very relevant and real message. I feel honored to be part of the fellowship here at fanstory.com, and have been thoroughly and riched by the vein of spirituality which runs through here. And honor and a pleasure to write with you here.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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Thank you,
God bless
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Fonda!
Your message is uplifting, spiritual, and heartfelt.
However, while this offering is structured as haiku, it is not as it does not address nature, is written in upper case, involves a human element, and there is no satori - or "aha moment in the final line. I also question the use of quotations.
Nevertheless, it is a fine 5/7/5.
Thank you for sharing!
Diane
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello Fonda!
Your message is uplifting, spiritual, and heartfelt.
However, while this offering is structured as haiku, it is not as it does not address nature, is written in upper case, involves a human element, and there is no satori - or "aha moment in the final line. I also question the use of quotations.
Nevertheless, it is a fine 5/7/5.
Thank you for sharing!
Diane
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from RShipp
You followed the rules for a haiku.
Your message was clearly stated.
Your picture was perfect for this haiku.
Good luck in the Haiku Poetry contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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You followed the rules for a haiku.
Your message was clearly stated.
Your picture was perfect for this haiku.
Good luck in the Haiku Poetry contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Hitcher
If man stopped taking lives and stopped waging war the world we live in would be a much better place : ))
Your 5-7-5 spiritual offering is powerful but I'm not sure it qualifies as a haiku... a haiku is defined by its reference to nature.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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If man stopped taking lives and stopped waging war the world we live in would be a much better place : ))
Your 5-7-5 spiritual offering is powerful but I'm not sure it qualifies as a haiku... a haiku is defined by its reference to nature.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good and inspirational. When I was in college, I worked with a man whose son borrowed his truck one night and had a hit and run accident where the other driver was killed. The son came home and told his father about it. The father called the police and told him he was the driver. He went to prison for his son's crime.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This is very good and inspirational. When I was in college, I worked with a man whose son borrowed his truck one night and had a hit and run accident where the other driver was killed. The son came home and told his father about it. The father called the police and told him he was the driver. He went to prison for his son's crime.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jesus's love is everlasting love. He loves us forever and ever. There's no greater love than His. I pray to Him often so He will bring peace instead of intense selfishness.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Jesus's love is everlasting love. He loves us forever and ever. There's no greater love than His. I pray to Him often so He will bring peace instead of intense selfishness.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this could be a great haiku poem. The only problem I have with it is that a haiku is always written in lower case and is normally about nature. You've written a great 5-7-5 poem but a haiku it's not. Good luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hi there, this could be a great haiku poem. The only problem I have with it is that a haiku is always written in lower case and is normally about nature. You've written a great 5-7-5 poem but a haiku it's not. Good luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Tina Crute
With a simple poem about a profound thought, or rather truth, you make this poem seem bigger than itself.
Nice writing! Good luck in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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With a simple poem about a profound thought, or rather truth, you make this poem seem bigger than itself.
Nice writing! Good luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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You are welcome! I think you are God's biggest cheerleader! I
may have to write that poem!
Tina
