Scene at a Pet Store 3
Pons and Ned still at the store14 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another good entry for the Ned and Pons story.
Well told and clear.
The story is easy to follow in the dialogue. Well done, and I'm awaiting his decision.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Another good entry for the Ned and Pons story.
Well told and clear.
The story is easy to follow in the dialogue. Well done, and I'm awaiting his decision.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Another good entry for the Ned and Pons story.
Well told and clear.
The story is easy to follow in the dialogue. Well done, and I'm awaiting his decision.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Another good entry for the Ned and Pons story.
Well told and clear.
The story is easy to follow in the dialogue. Well done, and I'm awaiting his decision.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from Ulla
A Bill, bless Ned's soft heart. how can you not like him and he would be so good with a wee dog. I'm sure, he could manage that. Great addition. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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A Bill, bless Ned's soft heart. how can you not like him and he would be so good with a wee dog. I'm sure, he could manage that. Great addition. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Ulla. He?ll likely end up with a Heinz 57.
Comment from nomi338
Poor Ned. I very much fear that if Ned gets a dog as large as a Rottweiler, Great Dane, or some other larger sized dog he may not be able to care for it, or even maybe prevent himself from being attacked and eaten by such.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Poor Ned. I very much fear that if Ned gets a dog as large as a Rottweiler, Great Dane, or some other larger sized dog he may not be able to care for it, or even maybe prevent himself from being attacked and eaten by such.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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It might be a dog eat Ned situation.
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Exactly.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, bless his heart, he would be so gentle with an animal, I could just picture him. What a clever script, Bill, I like Ned, he's such an innocent, that you want to give him a cuddle. Yep, a puppy would be perfect for Ned, he'd love it for sure, and get loved back. Loved this one, Bill! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Aww, bless his heart, he would be so gentle with an animal, I could just picture him. What a clever script, Bill, I like Ned, he's such an innocent, that you want to give him a cuddle. Yep, a puppy would be perfect for Ned, he'd love it for sure, and get loved back. Loved this one, Bill! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Do you think a lap dog, or a Heinz 57 would be better?
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LOL! A Heinz 57, they are most definitely the best! xx
Comment from susand3022
Good morning Bill... If you ever give up writing these guys, I'm leaving the forum. It won't be any fun anymore! I love these guys and I always look forward to the way they make me laugh! LOL
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Good morning Bill... If you ever give up writing these guys, I'm leaving the forum. It won't be any fun anymore! I love these guys and I always look forward to the way they make me laugh! LOL
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Susan. I?ll pass that along.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for Judi and Yvonne joining in the fun with our boys, Ned and Pons! :) What a fun idea, Bill - great job! ;) :) Thanx, as always, for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hooray for Judi and Yvonne joining in the fun with our boys, Ned and Pons! :) What a fun idea, Bill - great job! ;) :) Thanx, as always, for sharing! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Yvette. I guess we all had fun at the pet store.
Comment from Tina Crute
This is downright hilarious. I have never laughed out loud before on this site, so this deserves at least a six! What can I say? This was funny and captivating all the way to the end. I read it to my husband and could hardly get some words out!
Brilliant sense of humor:)
Tina
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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This is downright hilarious. I have never laughed out loud before on this site, so this deserves at least a six! What can I say? This was funny and captivating all the way to the end. I read it to my husband and could hardly get some words out!
Brilliant sense of humor:)
Tina
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much, Tina, for the encouraging review. Bill
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Oh no, thank you:)
Tina
Comment from judiverse
I love the Ned calls Yvonne e-phone. You give me too much credit. I had to look up ficus. Ned should definitely get a dog at the shelter. The right one will ask for him to take him, without a worry about Ned's IQ. Perhaps Ned's problem is his hearing? Funny business about the pit bull Maybe that's what causes him to lack comprehension, and not his mental ability. Much luck to Ned in finding a pet as they go on to the animal. A mutt that loves him will be just the one for Ned. judi
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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I love the Ned calls Yvonne e-phone. You give me too much credit. I had to look up ficus. Ned should definitely get a dog at the shelter. The right one will ask for him to take him, without a worry about Ned's IQ. Perhaps Ned's problem is his hearing? Funny business about the pit bull Maybe that's what causes him to lack comprehension, and not his mental ability. Much luck to Ned in finding a pet as they go on to the animal. A mutt that loves him will be just the one for Ned. judi
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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We?ll see what happens. Thanks for being a good sport.
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You're welcome. We're getting Ned to the animal shelter, so he'll probably find a dog just asking Ned to adopt him. judi
Comment from damommy
I am honored that you put me in the story. You have depicted me just as I really am. What insight you have. Poor Ned. I'm not sure he could take care of a cactus even. I hope he finds what he wants and what he can handle.
Thanks again,
E-phone
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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I am honored that you put me in the story. You have depicted me just as I really am. What insight you have. Poor Ned. I'm not sure he could take care of a cactus even. I hope he finds what he wants and what he can handle.
Thanks again,
E-phone
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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He might even get put in a pen himself. Thanks for being a good sport, Yvonne.
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Thank YOU for thinking of me. I loved being part of the story!
