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A '5-7-5' Contest Offering14 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Many thanks!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about looking n the mirror first before looking at another to find errors and flaws. First cleanse your face from dark spots before you find anothers.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about looking n the mirror first before looking at another to find errors and flaws. First cleanse your face from dark spots before you find anothers.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Many thanks!!
Comment from Therese Caron
Very good 5-7-5 poem. This is a very interesting poem and I think it can be taken several ways, which makes it an even better poem. The image you chose to accompany your poem complements it greatly. I think this is a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Very good 5-7-5 poem. This is a very interesting poem and I think it can be taken several ways, which makes it an even better poem. The image you chose to accompany your poem complements it greatly. I think this is a good contest entry.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Many thanks!!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. Your words have a lot of truth to them. We need to look in the mirror before judging others. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 575 poem contest. Your syllable count is correct. Your words have a lot of truth to them. We need to look in the mirror before judging others. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Many thanks!!
