Acrostics
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Comment from Janetsue
This is a very clever posting. It's intriguing and you have chosen the perfect picture to support your message about the week's individual days. (I've heard it said that the best car to buy is one assembled on a Wednesday--the workers have recovered from the weekend's festivities that lingered through Tuesday, and they are not yet having their minds kept focused on the upcoming weekend from Thursday through Friday.) LOL
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is a very clever posting. It's intriguing and you have chosen the perfect picture to support your message about the week's individual days. (I've heard it said that the best car to buy is one assembled on a Wednesday--the workers have recovered from the weekend's festivities that lingered through Tuesday, and they are not yet having their minds kept focused on the upcoming weekend from Thursday through Friday.) LOL
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Possum you made my day my new phone friend. I'm not going to reward you with an acrostic!
Kindly,
Darren
Comment from Alchera
Wow! A week Word acrostic that I will transform in Triplet thread acrostic or cross acrostics it depends on what will and than I'll show You but it will take me time to complete them all because I am too busy with my six naughty grandchildren.
Beautifully penned throughout their "Word acrostic" structural format and their narrative story lined content. Bravo!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Wow! A week Word acrostic that I will transform in Triplet thread acrostic or cross acrostics it depends on what will and than I'll show You but it will take me time to complete them all because I am too busy with my six naughty grandchildren.
Beautifully penned throughout their "Word acrostic" structural format and their narrative story lined content. Bravo!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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thanks so much for your kind review and warm words are appreciated. Sounds like you have your hands full with the grandchildren, but you are a knowledgeable and positive mentor I'm certain after reading about your brumby horses.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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You arte always welcomed and Blessings from Italy. Tony
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I noticed that all of these days except the last focus on yesterday or tomorrow. "Yesterday, another, eventually, secondary".
Finally, " inside" the presence of the present. Very clever. I hope other readers enjoy this as much as I did.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I noticed that all of these days except the last focus on yesterday or tomorrow. "Yesterday, another, eventually, secondary".
Finally, " inside" the presence of the present. Very clever. I hope other readers enjoy this as much as I did.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I value your powers of observation beyond all others to notice that I had secretly made a nested poem. This is the best review of Got, thank you for your perception
Comment from lauralumummu
Interesting, different, wheres Saturday and Sunday. I like your quirky acrostics poem. I read it over a couple of times and find it fascinating in a weird way. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Interesting, different, wheres Saturday and Sunday. I like your quirky acrostics poem. I read it over a couple of times and find it fascinating in a weird way. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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thanks for your input I had to write this one after riding one titled the weekends which is an acrostic for Saturday and Sunday which you can easily find in my profile
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow do I know the Monday syndrome! Rising at 6 AM five days a week to face eight hours on a hard cement floor, and for a pittance of what I used to earn, facing the disrespect that comes with old age(which I refuse to acknowledge).
Interesting work!
irish
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Wow do I know the Monday syndrome! Rising at 6 AM five days a week to face eight hours on a hard cement floor, and for a pittance of what I used to earn, facing the disrespect that comes with old age(which I refuse to acknowledge).
Interesting work!
irish
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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thanks Irish I really appreciate your input, comparisons, and refusal to be drawn down into the doldrums of negativity to join the Democrats there.
There's just one you're missing now,
Here, Real, NOW
and I will email you part of it. Thanks again your comments are sincerely appreciated~
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Carl DeVere
I can relate...oftentimes it just seems that way that you express. I have some thoughts about the Y endings: " Yeastiness?"--can you taste the hops in the beer after work...Friday is close. "Yahweh"--Thank God It's Friday!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I can relate...oftentimes it just seems that way that you express. I have some thoughts about the Y endings: " Yeastiness?"--can you taste the hops in the beer after work...Friday is close. "Yahweh"--Thank God It's Friday!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Houston is I was looking for the definition of fruitfulness thank you so much for your kind review and I have returned it with her view of my own. Blessings, brother Badger AKA Darren
Comment from lyenochka
It makes sense after your weekend poem, you'd do a weekdays poem! I am intrigued by "yeastiness" and what that could mean - perhaps it gives rise for the "fortuitous" Friday the beginning of Sabbath in Yahweh. I like the progression from "meandering" to greater sense of direction over the week.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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It makes sense after your weekend poem, you'd do a weekdays poem! I am intrigued by "yeastiness" and what that could mean - perhaps it gives rise for the "fortuitous" Friday the beginning of Sabbath in Yahweh. I like the progression from "meandering" to greater sense of direction over the week.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes I looked up Euston yes in the dictionary and the meaning which I'm leaning toward right here is fruitfulness
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I really appreciate your ideas and I'm glad that you were able to work out the logic for yourself and come up to some of the other logical conclusions, such as I didn't notice that meandering had turned toward a more direct course. I had to acknowledge Yahweh one more time during the week because we are to acknowledge him at all. All times and He will direct our paths
