Love By The Fireplace
Passion in action...25 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is an excellent poem for the contest. It's very romantic. Your picture
is great. It's so realistic. It is easy to be seduced by a warm fireplace.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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This is an excellent poem for the contest. It's very romantic. Your picture
is great. It's so realistic. It is easy to be seduced by a warm fireplace.
Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! Definitely a winter treat! Appreciate you enjoyed xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Neat work to get a 5-7-5 with end rhymes as well, with pace, fireplace, and embrace. Nice graphic. I think you did a good pairing of elements there.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Neat work to get a 5-7-5 with end rhymes as well, with pace, fireplace, and embrace. Nice graphic. I think you did a good pairing of elements there.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you!! :)
Comment from Tina Crute
This is a great contest entry because you have it all...great illustration, perfect font color and background and a theme
we can all relate to! Everything meshes well, if that makes sense!
Good luck in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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This is a great contest entry because you have it all...great illustration, perfect font color and background and a theme
we can all relate to! Everything meshes well, if that makes sense!
Good luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much!! xoxo
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Xoxo whoever you are!
Tina
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, that's a very nice 5-7-5 love poem. I like snuggling by the fireplace, a warm cozy feeling. You have captured the feelings that can grow by the heat of the fire... sometimes... if we're lucky! :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Hello Author, that's a very nice 5-7-5 love poem. I like snuggling by the fireplace, a warm cozy feeling. You have captured the feelings that can grow by the heat of the fire... sometimes... if we're lucky! :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you! So happy you enjoyed it!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
The matching video/picture works perfectly to make the verse feel warm.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
The matching video/picture works perfectly to make the verse feel warm.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you Sharon!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how romantic -- the fireplace, some wine, and a sleeping bag!! ;) This is a great offering for this contest... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Oh, how romantic -- the fireplace, some wine, and a sleeping bag!! ;) This is a great offering for this contest... thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Oh darn I knew I forgot something - the wine! Thanks Yvette! xoxo!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery,
alliteration, and rhyme.
-A romantic poem for
a January day.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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-Nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery,
alliteration, and rhyme.
-A romantic poem for
a January day.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much!! Love a fireplace! :)
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You are very welcome; they are cozy and romantic.
Comment from Gail Denham
However, I must point out that sitting by the fire can become overwhelming - like when I'm baking or whipping up a dinner, the kitchen becomes unbearable.
Just kidding. firesplaces are a bit romantic. A wood stove doesn't have the same effect - but I sure love having one.
Good poem
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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However, I must point out that sitting by the fire can become overwhelming - like when I'm baking or whipping up a dinner, the kitchen becomes unbearable.
Just kidding. firesplaces are a bit romantic. A wood stove doesn't have the same effect - but I sure love having one.
Good poem
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Haha! that's funny! Hopefully, one would have their bear rug back just a bit in case of "sparks"! lol thanks for your awesome comment! xoxo
Comment from Ogden
There's a lot to like in your romantic 5-7-5, not the least of which is your animated fireplace illustration. Scenario well-described in seventeen syllables.
Don
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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There's a lot to like in your romantic 5-7-5, not the least of which is your animated fireplace illustration. Scenario well-described in seventeen syllables.
Don
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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thanks so much! love a fireplace! appreciate your feedback! xoxo
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You are very welcome, anonymous poet.
Don
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xoxoxo!
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Hugs lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing quite so inviting as an open fire, especially when it is cold outside! Watching it is mesmerising and heat a joy, you brought those memories to me here with your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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There is nothing quite so inviting as an open fire, especially when it is cold outside! Watching it is mesmerising and heat a joy, you brought those memories to me here with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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thank you! love a fireplace! appreciate you enjoyed my fire! :)
