Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a well-written poem. So warm and heartfelt. Your great word choice allows the reader to feel the love, admiration the couple has for each other. Nice job.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Thank You!

Comment from Colin John

Excellent

Hi Brenda, nicely worded and over eternity and forever a good piece of work here, this review feels like its taking forever to get passed the 150 number that will get me to the end. thanks for sharing kind regards Colin x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020

Thanks Colin!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Good heavens! FanStory on fire tonight! I almost caught my dinner on fire just reading this and not paying attention!! A wonderfully penned and passionate short verse poem, Brenda dear. I may use this line on my husband tonight, yet again.
Sending you my best as always,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Thanks Sally! xo

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

I believe in your composition, but it is a stretch about holding one for a century (-; Your idea is still very romantic.

Undoubtedly, other FS reviewers will give you kudos for your thought on this topic. Your author's note is appropriate to the same.

THANKS.

Mark

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Thank you! Lol

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Brenda,

I like this. I read a romance poem the other day (yesterday, maybe?) that was sooooo over the top. The guy was like loving the woman to a point of CONSUMPTION. It was a bit frightening. *smile*

I know there's all kinds of love, but THOSE kinds are a little overwhelming, you know? THIS kind I can understand and relate to.

Thanks a bunch. I enjoyed!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Thank You!