Unhidden Heart
Free Verse Assignment from FS Class24 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this splendid example of creating a free verse after reading a structured verse. I am delighted you were inspired by Edgar Allen Poe and added the parallel artwork. I admired your evocative storytelling and the personification of the "waves". Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing this splendid example of creating a free verse after reading a structured verse. I am delighted you were inspired by Edgar Allen Poe and added the parallel artwork. I admired your evocative storytelling and the personification of the "waves". Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello Joan. I am glad you liked this free verse from our class assignment. It is a good exercise to gain inspiration and get ideas. Thanks for your comments on Unhidden Heart.... I appreciate it so much! :)
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very lovely poem. I like the way it flows from the vivid description of the nature scene to the girl the speaker loves--paralleling the purity and sweetness of the two.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a very lovely poem. I like the way it flows from the vivid description of the nature scene to the girl the speaker loves--paralleling the purity and sweetness of the two.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello Janice. I am glad you liked this free verse from our class assignment. It is a good exercise to gain inspiration and get ideas. Thanks for your comments on Unhidden Heart.... I appreciate it so much! :)
Melissa
Comment from RodG
You have done a great job here, interpreting the picture while also giving us a revised interpretation of Poe's work. It is easy to visualize both the girl and the smitten Speaker. I especially like how you personify the waves as passionate fans of her. Rod
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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You have done a great job here, interpreting the picture while also giving us a revised interpretation of Poe's work. It is easy to visualize both the girl and the smitten Speaker. I especially like how you personify the waves as passionate fans of her. Rod
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello Rod. I am glad you liked this free verse from our class assignment. It is a good exercise to gain inspiration and get ideas. Thanks for your comments on Unhidden Heart.... I appreciate it so much! :)
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
I loved your version of Edgar Allan Poe's poem. Your poem was clearer in meaning to me that Poe's own poem. You might put his poem in the notes so that readers can compare both.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I loved your version of Edgar Allan Poe's poem. Your poem was clearer in meaning to me that Poe's own poem. You might put his poem in the notes so that readers can compare both.
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello Helen. I am glad you liked this free verse from our class assignment. It is a good exercise to gain inspiration and get ideas. Thanks for your comments on Unhidden Heart.... I appreciate you so much! :)
Melissa
