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pseudohermaphroditic

Teacup 7 syllable word

10 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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What an interesting word! I knew the term hermaphrodite but I didn't know that one could be pseudohermaphroditic! Great job with the definition even while losing a syllable and the final line is perfect! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Bill Schott
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This teacup poem, pseudohermaphaditic, fulfills the challenge and does it well. I think the he-she situation, named after Hermes and Aphrodite, would be rough going.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How unfortunate if this happened to anyone! I have never heard of it before, so I learned something and your teacup poem described this condition perfectly Trisha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Twenty letter Teacup dictionary poem about having male and female components to reproduce. The one without the other have no potential to succeed.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, another fine entry into the teacup contest. Some of these words are a challenge, but I'd say you did a terrific job. It's very clear, and each descending definition knits together nicely for a saucer effect at the end.

Great job and I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from KTMgirl82
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I feel like you just copied the definition from the dictionary? No feeling, no meaning? What are you trying to accomplish? Secondarily, there is ZERO feeling in this piece? Where are you going with this after the definition?

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thanks for zero
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- you chose a doozie of a word, Trisha!! ;) But you really did a great job filling in your teacup with it!! ;) :) Another great 'sciency' offering for us nerds out here to enjoy! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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wow, and wow again.
Very nicely done for the contest and a true word, I had to try to pronounce it and had a hard time but I looked it up and it is there. Nice one

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and
presentation, Trisha.
-Good to see you
in the New Year; hope
it is a good one for you.
-A good word choice
and definitions and
descriptive examples.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha
reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Jan-2020
    You are very welcome, Trisha.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Hope your health is good 🤗
reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Jan-2020
    Yes, it is, and hope you are doing well, too!
Comment from Eve Vasa
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Wow, that was a word I didn't know. Interesting. I liked this short poem that says so much in a few words. And the artwork is very appropriate. As are your author notes. I do google if I can't understand and I'm interested, but author notes are great. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvement. A work I'd recommend and thanks for sharing it, Eve.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thanks for a supportive review, hugs Trisha