Otherworldly Woman
Faery Queen.7 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi John! Boy, that headdress is something else already! 'Unworldly' is certainly one way to describe her. I loved the words you used to describe the lady in your poem... ochre curls that scorch the earth... certainly lets you know where the lass came from! :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hi John! Boy, that headdress is something else already! 'Unworldly' is certainly one way to describe her. I loved the words you used to describe the lady in your poem... ochre curls that scorch the earth... certainly lets you know where the lass came from! :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Haha Sandra... no not that place. Lol. More like Shakespeare's "Midsummer Night's Dream."
Thanks so much for the review.
Best
John
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Ha! Ha! Susan! lol
? but that's okay... I've been someone else all my life... lol
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Hahaha I know, I know. Ssssssusan!
I have no idea how I managed to rechristened you because I was desperately seeking Susan when I was trying to type your name. Lol
Comment from Gail Denham
Really - you could have this far-out woman for your valentine? I think the horns on top would be a deterent! - Interesting poem, cute. But what an unusual get-up.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Really - you could have this far-out woman for your valentine? I think the horns on top would be a deterent! - Interesting poem, cute. But what an unusual get-up.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hahaha Gail.
Yes my words, my thoughts but not my desire. The poem is just a literary creation for the Valentine competition. I actually changed my words after selecting that picture and centered the poem on her. She is unearthly like a Faery Queen or enchantress who would control the minds of men.
Thanks for the read and great comments.
Best
Joh
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short Valentine's poem. To choose a Valentine is a big task and we are sometimes pick one that is very tricky to handle without gloves or a poking iron.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A very well-written short Valentine's poem. To choose a Valentine is a big task and we are sometimes pick one that is very tricky to handle without gloves or a poking iron.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your wish for a hot redhead here is loud and clear and she will no doubt light your fire! A fine Valentine's poem here. This girl is a beauty, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Your wish for a hot redhead here is loud and clear and she will no doubt light your fire! A fine Valentine's poem here. This girl is a beauty, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hahaha
No I have desire for a redhead though my mum and one of my sisters have hair kf fire. Lol
Strange thing is my original poem penned ceased to be once I had chose the artwork. I was so taken by the picture that I decided to write something more representative of it.
Glad you liked it though.
Best
John x
Comment from Ben1
It's a good poem, I'd like to see this hottie. I liked your metaphor of comparing her to be as hot as a demon I believe from the picture you posted with it. Or is it a metaphor for of woman sometimes being demons themselves, I could see it both ways. Good job with the poem, I hope you find this woman unless you already have.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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It's a good poem, I'd like to see this hottie. I liked your metaphor of comparing her to be as hot as a demon I believe from the picture you posted with it. Or is it a metaphor for of woman sometimes being demons themselves, I could see it both ways. Good job with the poem, I hope you find this woman unless you already have.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Haha thanks Ben.
Tis only a poem. Interestingly my original words melted away after I chose the artwork to go with them. I did a total rewrite to match the photo. Lol I saw a Faery Queen not a demon. She is from the underworld of literature not that other biblical place.
Thanks for the review.
Best
John
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Valentine Poem contest.
The short verse of an unworldly woman, and the matching artwork is amazing.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Valentine Poem contest.
The short verse of an unworldly woman, and the matching artwork is amazing.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you Sharon I really do appreciate your words of praise.
Best
John
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, John.
-Good to see you on FS.
-Hope you are having
a good New Year!
-You have used your
twenty syllables well.
-I like how you divided
the lines in half, and have
good meter and imagery.
-That's a lot to get in that
few words, and it is done well.
-I like the ending with the
repetition of the 'w' sound.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation, John.
-Good to see you on FS.
-Hope you are having
a good New Year!
-You have used your
twenty syllables well.
-I like how you divided
the lines in half, and have
good meter and imagery.
-That's a lot to get in that
few words, and it is done well.
-I like the ending with the
repetition of the 'w' sound.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!!
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You are welcome.
