Comment from May 1

Excellent

That's such a wonderful poem and an interesting approach to the topic. It is well-written and enjoyable to read. Also, I like the image you chose for this topic.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I really like your approach to this prompt. This is realistic and we can easily visualize this newly-wedded couple toasting each other with champagne as their NEW lives begin. Rod

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thanks for the review. I read the prompts carefully now and thought I had covered the bases. I am not a big fan of marriage, but I can appreciate love. Cheers.

Comment from Ben1

Excellent

Sounds good. It made me feel happy, and excited to get married. If I ever do, it makes me think of the good things in life like champagne. I liked how you explained the two different parts of life one while independent the other with a new mate to spend your whole life with. Good poem, makes me want champagne, and a love.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Well, first let me say I hope the love of your life appears today, she's looking for you too. Thanks for the encouraging vote. Cheers.