Baby, It's You
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Comment from Tina Crute
This was written to feel like natural interaction. Its smooth and very true-to-life. I enjoyed the budding romance, not so much the wild sister's antics, but like I said, true-to-life! The character's are well developed. They play their parts well!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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This was written to feel like natural interaction. Its smooth and very true-to-life. I enjoyed the budding romance, not so much the wild sister's antics, but like I said, true-to-life! The character's are well developed. They play their parts well!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Yes, Karolina is a bit crazy LOL
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Its realistic then! There needs
to be a wild one in a story:)
Tina
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
As this is my first time reading this story, all of it was out of context for me. Having said that, I liked your writing style and dialogues as they were close to reality like how people converse in real life. Good job! Cheers
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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As this is my first time reading this story, all of it was out of context for me. Having said that, I liked your writing style and dialogues as they were close to reality like how people converse in real life. Good job! Cheers
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
