Grandma
Looking at grandma's picture15 total reviews
Comment from Ben1
It was a good and sad poem I liked the rhymes that you placed it in. It was a nice smooth read. I am sorry about your grandma we all lose loved ones in our life but the best thing to do is write about them and live life to its fullest, good job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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It was a good and sad poem I liked the rhymes that you placed it in. It was a nice smooth read. I am sorry about your grandma we all lose loved ones in our life but the best thing to do is write about them and live life to its fullest, good job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Many thanks Ben so glad you like it.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a sweet little ekphrastic poem that also seems to have a basis in reality. I like the rhyme scheme, and congrats on 'miss her' and 'picture.' Very good entry!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a sweet little ekphrastic poem that also seems to have a basis in reality. I like the rhyme scheme, and congrats on 'miss her' and 'picture.' Very good entry!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the review. Jen
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, this is so sweet--the poem and the picture. Conveying the memories
of simple, good times with Grandma from the viewpoint of a child is moving--very effective.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Oh, this is so sweet--the poem and the picture. Conveying the memories
of simple, good times with Grandma from the viewpoint of a child is moving--very effective.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much. Jen
Comment from kahpot
Very clever, I like the way you have written this through the eyes of a child and the simple yet everlasting things we ( they) remember, an excellent read bringing back memories for everyone, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Very clever, I like the way you have written this through the eyes of a child and the simple yet everlasting things we ( they) remember, an excellent read bringing back memories for everyone, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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So glad you like it. Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAWWW nicely done for the art contest, indeed she is very talented. Great rhyme and easy to read, short but all so true when it comes to grandmas. Good luck
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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AAAWWW nicely done for the art contest, indeed she is very talented. Great rhyme and easy to read, short but all so true when it comes to grandmas. Good luck
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely message to go with the photo. I wish you the best in the contest. May your evening be blessed.
Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a lovely message to go with the photo. I wish you the best in the contest. May your evening be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and super*. Much appreciated. Jen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Jen. Good job with the prompt. Your lines read well with good rhymes. You paint a great picture of Grandma as seen though the eyes of a child--I like that POV. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Jen. Good job with the prompt. Your lines read well with good rhymes. You paint a great picture of Grandma as seen though the eyes of a child--I like that POV. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank ho so much for your kind words. Jen
Comment from lyenochka
What a great picture you chose to go with your poem! I'm glad you entered the contest. We all have precious memories about our grandmother and can relate to your words. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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What a great picture you chose to go with your poem! I'm glad you entered the contest. We all have precious memories about our grandmother and can relate to your words. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your continued support Helen, my friend. Jen
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing a relationship with a grandmother from the point of view of a young child. I admired the parallel artwork you selected to reinforce your description. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing a relationship with a grandmother from the point of view of a young child. I admired the parallel artwork you selected to reinforce your description. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from BeasPeas
I do like Linda Bickston's art. We all need loving grandmas. I didn't have one. One was standoffish and the other died when my mom was a teenager. The image is of a loving woman who appreciates her family and I'm sure, from your nice poem, it was reciprocal. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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I do like Linda Bickston's art. We all need loving grandmas. I didn't have one. One was standoffish and the other died when my mom was a teenager. The image is of a loving woman who appreciates her family and I'm sure, from your nice poem, it was reciprocal. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
