Life With A Ski Racer
A 50-word relationship.17 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes these 50 word relationships are getting more interesting a - this one really captures the ambiance on that piste! and what a great pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yes these 50 word relationships are getting more interesting a - this one really captures the ambiance on that piste! and what a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty word relationship commentary. The ski racer is always on a chase, hard to catch, his live for downhill parties will be his downfall. No one likes a going nowhere relationship.
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A very well-written fifty word relationship commentary. The ski racer is always on a chase, hard to catch, his live for downhill parties will be his downfall. No one likes a going nowhere relationship.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
Comment from lyenochka
A flying tuck? I guess these are skiing terms - something this originally-from-Hawaii gal doesn't know much about. I liked that she's "Bianca" since she likes skiing on that "white" powder.
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A flying tuck? I guess these are skiing terms - something this originally-from-Hawaii gal doesn't know much about. I liked that she's "Bianca" since she likes skiing on that "white" powder.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
Comment from patcelaw
Life with a ski racer could get cold and things could go downhill quickly. May you have a wonderful week full of blessings.
Patricia
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Life with a ski racer could get cold and things could go downhill quickly. May you have a wonderful week full of blessings.
Patricia
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
"She's piste off with him - goggle-eyed... " This one is priceless it really is a downhill winner. I love the picture and the Author's note to boot. My son is a journalist in the ski world.
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"She's piste off with him - goggle-eyed... " This one is priceless it really is a downhill winner. I love the picture and the Author's note to boot. My son is a journalist in the ski world.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
Comment from Gail Denham
Ha - poor man and woman. Some do take this sport most seriously - all their lives. My husband used to ski Mt.Bachelor - actually after he was 70 I think - but on the lift he met a much older person - who skiied endlessly. Good poem.
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Ha - poor man and woman. Some do take this sport most seriously - all their lives. My husband used to ski Mt.Bachelor - actually after he was 70 I think - but on the lift he met a much older person - who skiied endlessly. Good poem.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
Comment from Michele Harber
Watch your language, Lisa May. "Flying tuck??" What if there were children reading?! I'm sorry if you don't like what I'm saying, but I slalom as I see 'em.
I actually prefer the ones more chock full of cheesy (OK, funny - but you didn't hear it from me) puns, but you definitely got me on "Ski what I mean?" I also appreciate the way you always make your character names fit the story and add to the puns. I won't say this one made me laugh out loud, but it was definitely worth a chuckle.
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Watch your language, Lisa May. "Flying tuck??" What if there were children reading?! I'm sorry if you don't like what I'm saying, but I slalom as I see 'em.
I actually prefer the ones more chock full of cheesy (OK, funny - but you didn't hear it from me) puns, but you definitely got me on "Ski what I mean?" I also appreciate the way you always make your character names fit the story and add to the puns. I won't say this one made me laugh out loud, but it was definitely worth a chuckle.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
Comment from Mark Valentine
Some nice drug-related double entendres here with "speed" and "white powder." "Piste off" is great and, given that I am of the opinion that there's no such thing as a bad pun, I also liked "ski you later" - a groaner, but a smile-produce nonetheless.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Some nice drug-related double entendres here with "speed" and "white powder." "Piste off" is great and, given that I am of the opinion that there's no such thing as a bad pun, I also liked "ski you later" - a groaner, but a smile-produce nonetheless.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very good! This poem tended to be a bit more challenging than the others. High on the slopes of the mountain of love didn't do much for their relationship. So, they went their separate ways, slip-sliding away!
Patty
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Very good! This poem tended to be a bit more challenging than the others. High on the slopes of the mountain of love didn't do much for their relationship. So, they went their separate ways, slip-sliding away!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
Comment from BeasPeas
You are almost to your goal of 50 romances, Lisa. I've enjoyed reading all of them. I've never been a skier, but enjoyed reading about this romance. Some good lines here. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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You are almost to your goal of 50 romances, Lisa. I've enjoyed reading all of them. I've never been a skier, but enjoyed reading about this romance. Some good lines here. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
