Awaiting Liberation
The fleeting beauty of Winter's prison...37 total reviews
Comment from May 1
This is such an interesting way to look at winter. I really like the way you worded this poem. All in all, I think that this is a wonderful poem to read and I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is such an interesting way to look at winter. I really like the way you worded this poem. All in all, I think that this is a wonderful poem to read and I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, May -- Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored this write Yvette, few words spoke volumes here and your words are chilling and icy. Alas spring is a long way off, but I liked the positive rescuing here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I adored this write Yvette, few words spoke volumes here and your words are chilling and icy. Alas spring is a long way off, but I liked the positive rescuing here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Oh, Dolly, thank you so much for such a heartfelt review and those awesome stars!! ;) :) Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from Carl DeVere
This is excellent. Ice as a metaphor for imprisonment and the chill of Winter, as beautiful as it is to the eye, will not end too soon. I love "hunkers" down as a verb. It says so much about the reaction to the scene. Spring as rescue--like a Saint Bernard dog with a small barrel of brandy on his collar. Great word mastering!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is excellent. Ice as a metaphor for imprisonment and the chill of Winter, as beautiful as it is to the eye, will not end too soon. I love "hunkers" down as a verb. It says so much about the reaction to the scene. Spring as rescue--like a Saint Bernard dog with a small barrel of brandy on his collar. Great word mastering!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Carl! :) :) Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
While you are having a wonderful winter, we are having a not so wonderful summer, with record heat and a very fire laden wasteland, Send some ice. Well done, an excellent 5/7/5, poem, Yvette, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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While you are having a wonderful winter, we are having a not so wonderful summer, with record heat and a very fire laden wasteland, Send some ice. Well done, an excellent 5/7/5, poem, Yvette, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, Roy -- Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
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I can tell
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Descriptive 5-7-5 about how the world at wintertime has to 'hunker down' and wait until being rescued by Spring later on. I hear some 'n' consonance with end words 'again' and 'down.' Good share with a striking winter photo choice.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Descriptive 5-7-5 about how the world at wintertime has to 'hunker down' and wait until being rescued by Spring later on. I hear some 'n' consonance with end words 'again' and 'down.' Good share with a striking winter photo choice.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, Crystie -- Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
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I am that way, too, when it comes to winter.
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, February can't end soon enough! After that it should feel like spring is around he corner. Can't wait to be liberated! I want to see my poppies again...
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Yes, February can't end soon enough! After that it should feel like spring is around he corner. Can't wait to be liberated! I want to see my poppies again...
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, June -- Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
You really captured the "fleeting beauty of winter's prison" in this 5-7-5. I admired your use of hyperbole and personification, plus the perfect picture. Cheers- Joan
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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You really captured the "fleeting beauty of winter's prison" in this 5-7-5. I admired your use of hyperbole and personification, plus the perfect picture. Cheers- Joan
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, Joan -- Winter is number four in my list of favorite seasons.... can you tell?! LOL! :) ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
