My Offering
Jesus My Savior has given His all; I give Him my heart.41 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely work and I can see why your church family would enjoy you reading of it to them, I appreciate the scripture you use in your notes.
Patricia
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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This is a lovely work and I can see why your church family would enjoy you reading of it to them, I appreciate the scripture you use in your notes.
Patricia
Comment Written 07-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for your beautiful review of my poem, and for the six stars! It's so good when another believer has an understanding of what I'm expressing. God bless you!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem inspired during the Christmas season and by Bible passages. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your imagery like the "clay vessel" and "baggage". Here's to hope and best wishes in the Faith Poetry contest as well- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem inspired during the Christmas season and by Bible passages. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your imagery like the "clay vessel" and "baggage". Here's to hope and best wishes in the Faith Poetry contest as well- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much for your excellent review, which was both sensitive and attentive to detail. I appreciate everything you wrote! God bless you. - Mary Kay
Comment from judelesemann
"Lord Jesus, I give You my troublesome strife,"...how difficult this can be even though we are in our darkest hours. Your poem could be any Christians story of wandering aimlessly through life before they found the Lord and all His promises. Well done. You have a priceless gift ...keep on writing.
Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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"Lord Jesus, I give You my troublesome strife,"...how difficult this can be even though we are in our darkest hours. Your poem could be any Christians story of wandering aimlessly through life before they found the Lord and all His promises. Well done. You have a priceless gift ...keep on writing.
Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Jude, for your excellent review and for all you wrote about my poem. It's about the trials I am facing now, as a Christian, but yes, a lot of it could apply to the difficulties we have before we come to know Jesus Christ as our Savior. As it says in Hebrews 13:8, "Jesus Christ is the same yesterday, today and forever."
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you Leander for your deep and thoughtful review. I'm glad you understood the message of my poem. God bless you.
Comment from karenina
Bless you for sharing this. I is good to be reminded that we must surrender our very souls to God's will in order to find true grace and redemption. Your AABB rhyme scheme is very effective--reads like a faith filled series of couplets! A smooth read as well--helped by thoughtful punctuation. I sat and reflected and read it more than once!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Bless you for sharing this. I is good to be reminded that we must surrender our very souls to God's will in order to find true grace and redemption. Your AABB rhyme scheme is very effective--reads like a faith filled series of couplets! A smooth read as well--helped by thoughtful punctuation. I sat and reflected and read it more than once!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Karenina, for your excellent and very thoughtful review.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Susan Larson
"And my God will meet all your needs according to the riches of his glory in Christ Jesus." You conveyed this Bible passage so well with your poem of Triassic and tribulations. your ending was so uplifting.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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"And my God will meet all your needs according to the riches of his glory in Christ Jesus." You conveyed this Bible passage so well with your poem of Triassic and tribulations. your ending was so uplifting.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your excellent review of my poem, and your understanding of how God continues to deliver His children in our times of great need.
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful poem of faith Mary. The message is clear and powerful. Even though we have struggles and heartache in this life, He is always there. It was a joy to read this inspirational poem.
Well done!
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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A beautiful poem of faith Mary. The message is clear and powerful. Even though we have struggles and heartache in this life, He is always there. It was a joy to read this inspirational poem.
Well done!
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and for the beautiful things you wrote about my poem. God bless you.
Comment from pharp
Exceptional job in the penning of this power. A powerful message has been delivered. Excellent rhyming scheme and a very smooth flow. Did not detect any errors and this was a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest and that for sharing the scriptures an added bonus.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Exceptional job in the penning of this power. A powerful message has been delivered. Excellent rhyming scheme and a very smooth flow. Did not detect any errors and this was a most enjoyable read. The very best to you in the contest and that for sharing the scriptures an added bonus.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Portia, for writing such a beautiful review and also for the generous rating of six stars. I appreciate everything you wrote.
Comment from crzypnter
Hello my Christian friend, thank you for giving credit to the One and only who hears our pleas. I give him credit not only for my salvation, but for the inspiration and gift of writing. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem. God bless
August
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hello my Christian friend, thank you for giving credit to the One and only who hears our pleas. I give him credit not only for my salvation, but for the inspiration and gift of writing. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem. God bless
August
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you, August, for your beautiful review and for sharing your response as a fellow Christian. Yes, it is God who gives us our abilities, including the gift of writing, and we give Him the glory! May He continue to bless you in it. - Mary Kay
Comment from Alchera
I do like this religious poem. It's well written throughout its rhymed stanzaic structural format and its felt narrative story lined content. The flow is good,too.
A good spiritual work. Thanks for sharing and Blessings from Italy. Tony
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I do like this religious poem. It's well written throughout its rhymed stanzaic structural format and its felt narrative story lined content. The flow is good,too.
A good spiritual work. Thanks for sharing and Blessings from Italy. Tony
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much, Tony, for your excellent review of my poem, your analysis of its structure and your overall thoughts. It's great to hear from you, over in Italy. God bless you! - Mary Kay
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Always welcomed and Blessings. Tony
