Life With A Gondolier
A 50-word relationship.16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story of the gondolier is rudder funny when one stinks of it. Canal this boating be good for a relationship? Love is here and then gondola.
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This story of the gondolier is rudder funny when one stinks of it. Canal this boating be good for a relationship? Love is here and then gondola.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
Another fantastic short story. Everything works, from title to the final oar else.
Great job, Lisa. These are really well planned out in every aspect and entertaining as all get up.
Gloria
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Another fantastic short story. Everything works, from title to the final oar else.
Great job, Lisa. These are really well planned out in every aspect and entertaining as all get up.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from BeasPeas
Ah, those Italians. I was married to one of them. My daughter's middle name is Italia. Good little story on life with a gondolier. Favorite lines:
"Italia now, I'd rather play bridge with you," he sighed, "but it's high tide I went home to clean the venetian blinds, oar my wife'll divorce me." Marilyn
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Ah, those Italians. I was married to one of them. My daughter's middle name is Italia. Good little story on life with a gondolier. Favorite lines:
"Italia now, I'd rather play bridge with you," he sighed, "but it's high tide I went home to clean the venetian blinds, oar my wife'll divorce me." Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Tina Crute
Yay! Another fun poem! Thanks for the author's notes, on venezia.The last line is the best! You have a knack for what is funny to readers.
Good job on these funny, positive poems!
Tina
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Yay! Another fun poem! Thanks for the author's notes, on venezia.The last line is the best! You have a knack for what is funny to readers.
Good job on these funny, positive poems!
Tina
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty-word romantic commentary a singing gondolier in Venice Italy, he will gondel all the beautiful tourist girls around the canals while his wife keeps the Venetian blinds clean.
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A very well-written fifty-word romantic commentary a singing gondolier in Venice Italy, he will gondel all the beautiful tourist girls around the canals while his wife keeps the Venetian blinds clean.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL - a gondolier, how fun!! Have you seen the pics of some of the canals there now with their drought...? Of course, they were just flooded in the fall with the rains...! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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LOL - a gondolier, how fun!! Have you seen the pics of some of the canals there now with their drought...? Of course, they were just flooded in the fall with the rains...! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The play on words is delightful and I can never get enough of it. I have a few more to review and I am looking forward to seeing the new professions and their shenanigans.
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The play on words is delightful and I can never get enough of it. I have a few more to review and I am looking forward to seeing the new professions and their shenanigans.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done - is Venus in Italy? I didn't know that - but certainly "those tourist girls" - the dreams they nurse. Still this gondolier had a good moral view of marriage.
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Well done - is Venus in Italy? I didn't know that - but certainly "those tourist girls" - the dreams they nurse. Still this gondolier had a good moral view of marriage.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Mark Valentine
Thanks for another great installment so that we canal get our morning fix of laughter - "Venezia" and "Italia" are to die for.
Also- congrats - I see that you are the #1 ranked author at present - a fitting tribute to these great pieces.
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Thanks for another great installment so that we canal get our morning fix of laughter - "Venezia" and "Italia" are to die for.
Also- congrats - I see that you are the #1 ranked author at present - a fitting tribute to these great pieces.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
I thought gondolier was an STD until I read this!
I particularly liked the oblique reference to that most famous bridge -- the Bidge of Sighs -- that is slipped cunningly in here amongst the giggles. This was as usual great fun, almost oarsome in fact.
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I thought gondolier was an STD until I read this!
I particularly liked the oblique reference to that most famous bridge -- the Bidge of Sighs -- that is slipped cunningly in here amongst the giggles. This was as usual great fun, almost oarsome in fact.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
