Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the I Love... writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a loving one's lover's green eyes.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020

Sharon, I am very appreciative of your comments

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I liked this because I have green eyes and some have said they are mesmerising! You have fallen in love with someone because of their eyes and what is behind them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020

Well, there you go, Dolly! You with green eyes and remarkable talent. I am a fan from from across the pond!

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 13-Jan-2020

Words from the mystery poet here x x x

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 about the green eyes of the girl you live the most and she reflects all your deepest desires in her green eyes revealed to the world to see.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020

Sandra, I am very appreciative of your review and comments!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A beautifully penned and illustrated short verse poem. Your syllable count is good and you are ready for the contest.
Sending you my best wishes for the upcoming contest, mystery poet.
Sally Law :)

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020

Smiles back to you my friend!