Green Eyes
Mirroring my deep desire54 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You met all the criteria for the contest - what you love and you connect the "green" in the first line with the "consuming desire" as "green" symbolizes envy. Best wishes in the contest!
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You met all the criteria for the contest - what you love and you connect the "green" in the first line with the "consuming desire" as "green" symbolizes envy. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Iyenochka, thank you for the validation and good wishes.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Green Eyes", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Green Eyes", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Duchess, thank you for the validation and good wishes. Your six-strs is appreciated
Dear Anon,
you certainly deserved the sixes.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Gloria ....
Green eyes are neat. A most cool picture to go along with a fine short poem about something you love.
Just keep those green eyes shining and everything will turn out okay.
Great job and best of luck in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Green eyes are neat. A most cool picture to go along with a fine short poem about something you love.
Just keep those green eyes shining and everything will turn out okay.
Great job and best of luck in the booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Gloria, thank you for the validation and good wishes.
Comment from Sugarray77
Great job on this verse which is a perfect prompt for the I Love... your focus on the green eyes and the really good artwork are perfectly paired and I know will do well. Good luck.
Melissa
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Great job on this verse which is a perfect prompt for the I Love... your focus on the green eyes and the really good artwork are perfectly paired and I know will do well. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Melissa, thank you for the validation and good wishes.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very good entry for the contest. I like reflection of consuming desire in the green eyes. Even with your limited word count you described the situation perfectly. Marilyn
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This is a very good entry for the contest. I like reflection of consuming desire in the green eyes. Even with your limited word count you described the situation perfectly. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Marilyn, thank you for the validation and good wishes.
Comment from Susan Larson
I am particularly intrigued by this because I have green eyes, the rarest of eye colors about 2% of the population) and the least recognized in poetry and song. I hope things work out with you and your green eyed girl.
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I am particularly intrigued by this because I have green eyes, the rarest of eye colors about 2% of the population) and the least recognized in poetry and song. I hope things work out with you and your green eyed girl.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Susan, thank you for the validation and good wishes. I appreciate the six-star review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image;
those are gorgeous
green eyes!
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one
continuous thought
is effective.
-The imagery is good
with "reflecting green eyes."
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice image;
those are gorgeous
green eyes!
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one
continuous thought
is effective.
-The imagery is good
with "reflecting green eyes."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Pam, thank you for the validation
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You are welcome.
Comment from Malerie
I like the wY you projected the "green eye" as desire. The picture you selected pulls the readers into your passionate realm of desire. Well written and the words speak volumes.
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I like the wY you projected the "green eye" as desire. The picture you selected pulls the readers into your passionate realm of desire. Well written and the words speak volumes.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Malerie, I smile back, thank you!
Comment from May 1
Wow, that is so wonderfully said. I love your choice of vocabulary it works perfectly. All in all, I think that this is a very written poem that is also fun to read.
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Wow, that is so wonderfully said. I love your choice of vocabulary it works perfectly. All in all, I think that this is a very written poem that is also fun to read.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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May, thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a really well written 5-7-5 poem, telling how those lovely glorious green eyes have given you an all-consuming love. I think you have more than followed the contest rules and given them what they want. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
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This is a really well written 5-7-5 poem, telling how those lovely glorious green eyes have given you an all-consuming love. I think you have more than followed the contest rules and given them what they want. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your review and comments.
