Fresh, Always Frozen
me trying to be funny with a 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Cute idea to make a 5-7-5 into an ad. I guess it is really a 6-7-5 so a modern version, as the first line counts out. I think I am used to hearing 'nippy' more than 'nipply' in the last line to describe a cold day.
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Cute idea to make a 5-7-5 into an ad. I guess it is really a 6-7-5 so a modern version, as the first line counts out. I think I am used to hearing 'nippy' more than 'nipply' in the last line to describe a cold day.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the word: Nipsicles! This is a fun made-up word, very descriptive and ideal for those cold icicles, this is a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I liked the word: Nipsicles! This is a fun made-up word, very descriptive and ideal for those cold icicles, this is a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
Quite an interesting poem to read. I love the way you wrote it, it's really fun to read. Also, I love the image you chose for this poem since it fits it nicely.
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Quite an interesting poem to read. I love the way you wrote it, it's really fun to read. Also, I love the image you chose for this poem since it fits it nicely.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
