Summertime
Summertime Haiku entry15 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem possesses great tone. I could feel the summer breeze. Every word was crafted beautifully. I must read them all before voting, but so far your poem is the best. Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Your poem possesses great tone. I could feel the summer breeze. Every word was crafted beautifully. I must read them all before voting, but so far your poem is the best. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Summertime O Summertime Haiku Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of tender blossoms kissed and caressed by summer breeze.
Very well done. I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Summertime O Summertime Haiku Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of tender blossoms kissed and caressed by summer breeze.
Very well done. I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful Haiku. It's like a romance of flowers kissing and caressing. Absolutely lovely! Good luck!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful Haiku. It's like a romance of flowers kissing and caressing. Absolutely lovely! Good luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for stopping by!
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You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
I have read all the entries in the contest at this point, and yours is the only piece I feel meets all the requirements, is also a haiku AND makes me feel all oozy and happy inside. hehehe
In truth, this does make a beautiful image verbally and I think it's an awesome offering. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Dear Mystery Poet,
I have read all the entries in the contest at this point, and yours is the only piece I feel meets all the requirements, is also a haiku AND makes me feel all oozy and happy inside. hehehe
In truth, this does make a beautiful image verbally and I think it's an awesome offering. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I'm sp glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for stopping by!
Comment from Bill Schott
This summertime haiku, Summer Breeze, presented in a 5-7-5 framework, allow a tactile response to nature's beauty, even if only by the wind.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This summertime haiku, Summer Breeze, presented in a 5-7-5 framework, allow a tactile response to nature's beauty, even if only by the wind.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good,
as well as the imagery.
-Very good nature
reference with "summer breeze"
and a good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good,
as well as the imagery.
-Very good nature
reference with "summer breeze"
and a good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the haiku quite well, hopefully it will be a strong entry. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the haiku quite well, hopefully it will be a strong entry. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from dmt1967
I like the tenderness emanating from this poem and the flowers in the picture gave the feel of romance in the air. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I like the tenderness emanating from this poem and the flowers in the picture gave the feel of romance in the air. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights!
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your haiku Tender Blossoms Kissed was a good entry for the summertime o summertime contest entry. Your poem fit the syllable structure of a haiku. The poem fit with the picture. You should capitalize the t of Tender and the t of touch. I would recommend changing the tile to just Tender Blossoms Kissed without the specification that your poem is haiku because its already known from the description as well as capitalizing the title.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Your haiku Tender Blossoms Kissed was a good entry for the summertime o summertime contest entry. Your poem fit the syllable structure of a haiku. The poem fit with the picture. You should capitalize the t of Tender and the t of touch. I would recommend changing the tile to just Tender Blossoms Kissed without the specification that your poem is haiku because its already known from the description as well as capitalizing the title.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Apparently you are new to the site and are not familiar with the formal rules of haiku. The form is to include the word haiku in the title along with the first few words of the first line in the poem. Capital letters are optional. Not always necessary. Thank you, though, for taking the time to read.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written summertime haiku and breezes that work together tenderly touch each other like a tender touch from a lover. A great comparison between the summertime flowers and humans in love.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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A very well-written summertime haiku and breezes that work together tenderly touch each other like a tender touch from a lover. A great comparison between the summertime flowers and humans in love.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
