Memories
Why I am me4 total reviews
Comment from May 1
That's such an interesting view of the topic. I think I share your opinion. All in all, I think that this is a great poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Also, I like the image you chose for this one.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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That's such an interesting view of the topic. I think I share your opinion. All in all, I think that this is a great poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Also, I like the image you chose for this one.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging review.
Comment from Tina Crute
This is a unique way to present the idea that memories make us who we are.With only a few words, you make the reader think of their own memories and how they shaped them. I love the extreme colors, as they reinforce the very sunny and happy, or very dark extremes memories can be.
Simple yet profound, I love this!
Tina
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is a unique way to present the idea that memories make us who we are.With only a few words, you make the reader think of their own memories and how they shaped them. I love the extreme colors, as they reinforce the very sunny and happy, or very dark extremes memories can be.
Simple yet profound, I love this!
Tina
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the read and your thoughtful review. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome!!
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
Very good. Firstly, it 's the right format etc, but secondly, and importantly, it is an interesting take on an interesting subject.
Of course, biologically, our cells die every X years (I think it is 7). so, wherever memory is stored, the remembered material has to be transferred from one (dying) cell to another (fresh) cell at some point. It is quite likely that this transfer is fraught with error and the root cause of mis-remembering (of which I am often guilty).
And yes - all that we touch and all that we see is all that our lives will ever be (as they say).
Again, and interesting and thoughtful piece.
I wish you well in your competition.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Hello Anon
Very good. Firstly, it 's the right format etc, but secondly, and importantly, it is an interesting take on an interesting subject.
Of course, biologically, our cells die every X years (I think it is 7). so, wherever memory is stored, the remembered material has to be transferred from one (dying) cell to another (fresh) cell at some point. It is quite likely that this transfer is fraught with error and the root cause of mis-remembering (of which I am often guilty).
And yes - all that we touch and all that we see is all that our lives will ever be (as they say).
Again, and interesting and thoughtful piece.
I wish you well in your competition.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Yes, it gets more difficult every year to remember as cell die off. But really important happenings seem to pop-up when trigger by a thought or sensation. Thanks for the read and the interesting comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
They are definitely what makes us who we are... for better or for worse!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls!! :) :) :)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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They are definitely what makes us who we are... for better or for worse!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls!! :) :) :)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the read and the review.
