A Rival For Your Love
A romantic moment, until...13 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Quatrain poetry writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse tells of competing with the dog for a lover's affection.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Quatrain poetry writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse tells of competing with the dog for a lover's affection.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is pretty good and funny. If it's not the children interrupting a romantic interlude, then, it's the pets. That is or should be an unspoken rule. Close the door behind you and lock it. We don't want any surprise guests or having to explain what's going on. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
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This is pretty good and funny. If it's not the children interrupting a romantic interlude, then, it's the pets. That is or should be an unspoken rule. Close the door behind you and lock it. We don't want any surprise guests or having to explain what's going on. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Aw, shucks, the three of you look so cozy lying in bed together! Good job with the double entendre descriptions that fit both man and dog. Good luck with the contest!
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Aw, shucks, the three of you look so cozy lying in bed together! Good job with the double entendre descriptions that fit both man and dog. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Therese Caron
This is so true of dogs! The problem is, we love them so much that we treat them like people. Of course, sometimes they are nicer than people! This is a very well-written, very descriptive poem. The image you chose is perfect to complement your work. Good luck!
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This is so true of dogs! The problem is, we love them so much that we treat them like people. Of course, sometimes they are nicer than people! This is a very well-written, very descriptive poem. The image you chose is perfect to complement your work. Good luck!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about a man as his dog that can seldom be separated from one another, but when he prefers his dog above his girl then he is not worth shedding tears for.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about a man as his dog that can seldom be separated from one another, but when he prefers his dog above his girl then he is not worth shedding tears for.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
That's such a beautiful poem. I really like the way this is written especially the twist at the end. All in all, I think this is such a fun poem to read, I enjoyed it very much.
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That's such a beautiful poem. I really like the way this is written especially the twist at the end. All in all, I think this is such a fun poem to read, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from papa55mike
Don't you hate it when that happens? This is a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Great Job!
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Don't you hate it when that happens? This is a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Great Job!
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
A boy and his dog -- a boy of any age, I suppose. haha It does seem like a boy that age who is engaged in certain activities MIGHT begin to start making more adult choices -- but no. There's still the boy in him. Kinda sad, huh?
But makes for a cute poem! Thanks and good luck!
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Dear Mystery Poet,
A boy and his dog -- a boy of any age, I suppose. haha It does seem like a boy that age who is engaged in certain activities MIGHT begin to start making more adult choices -- but no. There's still the boy in him. Kinda sad, huh?
But makes for a cute poem! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Rival for Your Love'
Is a "Quatrain Poetry Contest Entry.'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great week!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"A Rival for Your Love'
Is a "Quatrain Poetry Contest Entry.'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great week!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
