Comment from Bicpen

Excellent

Excellent ...

syllables correct with a good image and face of wisdom which carries the mental picture well which is the well formed idea and quaint concepts within a simple and delectable little piece.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020

Thank you

reply by Bicpen on 12-Feb-2020

anytime ...

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

A great picture and poem describing Dew. You used great words to help describe your thoughts. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Magic Dragon. I like your 15 syllables of beauty personified. Your presentation is on point to your message and it felt like a moment of pure bliss reading this one. Well done and good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Perfect photo--did it inspire the poem or vice versa? I like the structure and the imagery. A suggestion: dew in drops/beads are kind of the same thing--perhaps pick one image and thus free up a syllable for more creative use. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020

Thank you

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Or a cleansing of the earth for the start of day... ;) :) Such a lovely offering for the contest that portrays the gentleness of nature after the rain has passed. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020

---

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020

Thank you

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I felt the reassurance of peace when I read your verse. Well done on the choice of topics with the stunning artwork that enhances it too. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020

---

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020

Thank you