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Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "St. Louis Chapter 20 part 3"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
15 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Barbara, a fabulous Friday to you. Thank you for another exciting chapter to your wonderful novel. While Mac and Logan are getting closer to each other, they also seem to be getting closer to solving this mystery. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Good job and have a great day!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Hello Barbara, a fabulous Friday to you. Thank you for another exciting chapter to your wonderful novel. While Mac and Logan are getting closer to each other, they also seem to be getting closer to solving this mystery. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Good job and have a great day!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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I can't wait to see how it plays out either. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
I don't know enough about the story to comment on it, but the dialogue here seems lively and there is an appropriate underlying tension to it all that keeps you watching out for something to happen at any moment, either through crime or romance. It's an interesting juggling of those two classic partners. There's enough mystery and murder and romance in the air to keep one wondering how this might turn out, and you have plenty of open avenues to keep everyone guessing. Murder mystery is not really my thing; although I read the Brains Benton mysteries as a kid and am a bit partial to Dorothy Sayers and her Peter Whimsey tales in that regard. estory
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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I don't know enough about the story to comment on it, but the dialogue here seems lively and there is an appropriate underlying tension to it all that keeps you watching out for something to happen at any moment, either through crime or romance. It's an interesting juggling of those two classic partners. There's enough mystery and murder and romance in the air to keep one wondering how this might turn out, and you have plenty of open avenues to keep everyone guessing. Murder mystery is not really my thing; although I read the Brains Benton mysteries as a kid and am a bit partial to Dorothy Sayers and her Peter Whimsey tales in that regard. estory
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. This is more of a romance than a mystery, but I don't go for boy meets girl and they jump into bed. I want a story to go with it.
Comment from Sankey
I was not notified of this. Glad I searched your portfolio. This was verrrry dramatic and believable even in fiction. That Sidney guy has got to be the problem in more ways than one. Can see Mac and Logan getting to that point of a relationship real soon. Keep up the good work. STILL HAD SIXES! YAY! I got home from my Head op (skin cancer) a while ago.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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I was not notified of this. Glad I searched your portfolio. This was verrrry dramatic and believable even in fiction. That Sidney guy has got to be the problem in more ways than one. Can see Mac and Logan getting to that point of a relationship real soon. Keep up the good work. STILL HAD SIXES! YAY! I got home from my Head op (skin cancer) a while ago.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. Please take care of your self.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ummmmmm... definitely heating up. LOL. You left this reader pondering the question Logan is pondering...
I don't know howto say it in a way you haven't heard me say it already, Barbara. This book is playing in my head like I'm watching a movie. Writing doesn't get much better than that, IMO. :)))
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Ummmmmm... definitely heating up. LOL. You left this reader pondering the question Logan is pondering...
I don't know howto say it in a way you haven't heard me say it already, Barbara. This book is playing in my head like I'm watching a movie. Writing doesn't get much better than that, IMO. :)))
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
This is the first time I have read your work and as this chapter comes with a lot of backstory that I'm not aware of this was out of context for me.
Yet, your expressions and dialogues were interesting. When I have time I'll be sure to read back. Cheers
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is the first time I have read your work and as this chapter comes with a lot of backstory that I'm not aware of this was out of context for me.
Yet, your expressions and dialogues were interesting. When I have time I'll be sure to read back. Cheers
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and reading.
Comment from tfawcus
Another good chapter in this ongoing saga. I like the way you have used humour about the scanty nightdress to lighten the tone. I reckon Logan will have to tread carefully with his suggestions, else this relationship might be taking one or two steps backwards! LOL
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Another good chapter in this ongoing saga. I like the way you have used humour about the scanty nightdress to lighten the tone. I reckon Logan will have to tread carefully with his suggestions, else this relationship might be taking one or two steps backwards! LOL
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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With McKenzie it's one step forward and twenty backwards. LOL . Thank you for the review.
Comment from judiverse
This is great. You keep the relationship between Mac and Logan going, and I enjoy the bits of humor you add, such as about how Mac's dressed. Parks seems to be drawing their attention as a suspect, and Mac shows Mitch their information on Parks. Mitch may be a trusted friend, but I'm beginning to wonder about him. Is he really concerned about her safety or worried about what she may find out? Maybe I'm reaching here, but it's fun to speculate. judi
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is great. You keep the relationship between Mac and Logan going, and I enjoy the bits of humor you add, such as about how Mac's dressed. Parks seems to be drawing their attention as a suspect, and Mac shows Mitch their information on Parks. Mitch may be a trusted friend, but I'm beginning to wonder about him. Is he really concerned about her safety or worried about what she may find out? Maybe I'm reaching here, but it's fun to speculate. judi
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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It is fun to speculate. When I was writing this novel, I speculated too. LOL . Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. I can tell you aren't giving anything away. judi
Comment from susand3022
Hi Barbara, I look so forward to seeing what's up in Mackenzie's world! I do love this story... I really do wish the posts were longer though, just when I'm starting to read... I have to stop. LOL Ahhh, well... we're all very Dickensian here. :)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Hi Barbara, I look so forward to seeing what's up in Mackenzie's world! I do love this story... I really do wish the posts were longer though, just when I'm starting to read... I have to stop. LOL Ahhh, well... we're all very Dickensian here. :)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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LOL . I like to use as few a words as possible. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
Barbara,
Nice job. I like the fact that Logan is at least admitting that her near-naked body is affecting him. hahahaha I think, before, he was even relutant to offer that much!
Nice job on this one and I enjoyed the whole thing. Very well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Barbara,
Nice job. I like the fact that Logan is at least admitting that her near-naked body is affecting him. hahahaha I think, before, he was even relutant to offer that much!
Nice job on this one and I enjoyed the whole thing. Very well done!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. Poor Logan, he's only a male.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
I noticed last week and also there is a Mitch, in your story and I cannot find him in you list of chacters.
What I like about your writings is how you describe what your chacters are doing, (here is good example)
Logan reached over, grabbed an afghan, and covered McKenzie. If we're going to continue these late night rendezvous, she needs to wear more night clothes. How do I approach that with her?
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Hello Barb,
I noticed last week and also there is a Mitch, in your story and I cannot find him in you list of chacters.
What I like about your writings is how you describe what your chacters are doing, (here is good example)
Logan reached over, grabbed an afghan, and covered McKenzie. If we're going to continue these late night rendezvous, she needs to wear more night clothes. How do I approach that with her?
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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I just checked my character list. Mitch is listed right after Donnie. Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you Barb for telling me Mitch is within your list of chacters. Gert
