Has Spring Sprung?
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an entertaining 5-7-5 with perfect syllabic adherence. I like the idea that the mind wants to be in spring, but the nose and the sneeze have other ideas. Great photo. End rhyme with 'breeze' and 'sneeze' as well!
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This is an entertaining 5-7-5 with perfect syllabic adherence. I like the idea that the mind wants to be in spring, but the nose and the sneeze have other ideas. Great photo. End rhyme with 'breeze' and 'sneeze' as well!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
Yes, it is winter and can you believe these warm temperatures? Great little verse for the 5-7-5 prompt. I wish you luck with this enjoyable read.
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Yes, it is winter and can you believe these warm temperatures? Great little verse for the 5-7-5 prompt. I wish you luck with this enjoyable read.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your 575, Miranda. Good job with the prompt--syllables are correct per line, the picture is a good pairing, there is good flow to your lines, and the message is clear--weather patterns are confused this time of the year. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
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I enjoyed your 575, Miranda. Good job with the prompt--syllables are correct per line, the picture is a good pairing, there is good flow to your lines, and the message is clear--weather patterns are confused this time of the year. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
This is such a fun poem to read because it starts with this wonderful image of spring and how it feels and then the ending comes as an awesome surprise. It works really well having in mind that many people experience spring weather in winter these days. All in all, I loved the poem.
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This is such a fun poem to read because it starts with this wonderful image of spring and how it feels and then the ending comes as an awesome surprise. It works really well having in mind that many people experience spring weather in winter these days. All in all, I loved the poem.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
