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Comment from Fonda Little
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Sounds like a story that's going to be full of action! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Fonda.