Comforter
a 5-7-511 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It's the wife's fault - she stole it!! ;) :) LOL! A wonderful 5-7-5 for a chilling afternoon of rain, Sir Bill! ;) Thanx for sharing and may you hang on to your warm comforter! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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It's the wife's fault - she stole it!! ;) :) LOL! A wonderful 5-7-5 for a chilling afternoon of rain, Sir Bill! ;) Thanx for sharing and may you hang on to your warm comforter! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Yvette.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, a great 5-7-5 poem written with imagery and imagination. I liked it a lot. The moon seems to give the comfort which is so much yearned for. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Hi Bill, a great 5-7-5 poem written with imagery and imagination. I liked it a lot. The moon seems to give the comfort which is so much yearned for. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from nomi338
I would be just a tad suspicious of someone who is warmed by the moon as opposed to someone warmed by the sun. Then I guess in this world there are always those who go counter to the way in which the majority move. Good for you soldier. Soldier on.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I would be just a tad suspicious of someone who is warmed by the moon as opposed to someone warmed by the sun. Then I guess in this world there are always those who go counter to the way in which the majority move. Good for you soldier. Soldier on.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks, nomi.
Comment from judiverse
A vulnerable person, feeling cold and lost. That's the time when a female is likely to step in. If she offers warm comfort, he'll be hers forever. Or for a while, anyway. Lovely artwork. I'm not so sure about the outstanding O's. Excellent wording in this. judi
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A vulnerable person, feeling cold and lost. That's the time when a female is likely to step in. If she offers warm comfort, he'll be hers forever. Or for a while, anyway. Lovely artwork. I'm not so sure about the outstanding O's. Excellent wording in this. judi
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Do they look like moons?
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It's over-reaching. judi
Comment from Mistydawn
What a well-written poem, very relatable, great imagery. Sometimes it's the small simple things in life that give us comfort, the courage to continue on. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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What a well-written poem, very relatable, great imagery. Sometimes it's the small simple things in life that give us comfort, the courage to continue on. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks, MD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice, Bill. I'm reading this as a love poem. We all need a "comforter" who will shut out the cares of the world, a haven to comes home to. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is very nice, Bill. I'm reading this as a love poem. We all need a "comforter" who will shut out the cares of the world, a haven to comes home to. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I like it, Marilyn.
Comment from lyenochka
Poor comforter! I'm guessing that it's the comforter that's lost? Or are the yellow "O"s that are highlighted throughout the "voice"?
Interesting photo, too. I see full moon not a "new moon" - unless you meant it differently. I know I'm too literal.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Poor comforter! I'm guessing that it's the comforter that's lost? Or are the yellow "O"s that are highlighted throughout the "voice"?
Interesting photo, too. I see full moon not a "new moon" - unless you meant it differently. I know I'm too literal.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Gee, this poem is crap.
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I did NOT say that. Liked the presentation!
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Whimper. Sniff. tee hee
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write filled with white moons! The moon is mystical and forever shining over us as it circles the sun and delights the earth with its glow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is a clever write filled with white moons! The moon is mystical and forever shining over us as it circles the sun and delights the earth with its glow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 poem about the warm comforter. You used very good words and very interesting imagery from the art work. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Bill, This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 poem about the warm comforter. You used very good words and very interesting imagery from the art work. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Tina Crute
How desolate your picture looks. Its a great one for your words! That doesn't sound quite right...but you get it. Your poem is small but efective!The o's make me feel a ghost is near. I'm glad you have the moon to comfort you!
Tina
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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How desolate your picture looks. Its a great one for your words! That doesn't sound quite right...but you get it. Your poem is small but efective!The o's make me feel a ghost is near. I'm glad you have the moon to comfort you!
Tina
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks, Tina
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Welcome:)
