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Second Chance Rain

5-7-5 rain poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the rain contest
with a slightly oblique reference to rain.
Second chances are sometimes doors to a great new life.
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Best wishes to you
Robert

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and you met the contest
requirements.
-I like your comparison of
rain to a "new lifestyle."
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Jan-2020
    You are quite welcome.