Blind as a Bat
20/20 vision poetry contest4 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Thank goodness for the advances in vision surgery that allow people to regain their vision and enjoy the sights around them. It sounds like you put up with a lot before it happened. I am happy to hear you can see so much better now.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
Thank goodness for the advances in vision surgery that allow people to regain their vision and enjoy the sights around them. It sounds like you put up with a lot before it happened. I am happy to hear you can see so much better now.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Dear w.j.debi, Thank you for your review and good luck wishes.
Comment from zanya
Wow what an interesting true story told first poetically and then additional notes at the end -the final line states it beautifully after the long vision journey - thanks for sharing this inspiring slice of life
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
Wow what an interesting true story told first poetically and then additional notes at the end -the final line states it beautifully after the long vision journey - thanks for sharing this inspiring slice of life
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Dear zanya, Thank you for your comments and review and compliments.
Comment from May 1
I really like this poem. It's quite an interesting approach to the topic. All in all, I think that this is a well-written poem that is also fun to read. Also, I like the image you chose for this one.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
I really like this poem. It's quite an interesting approach to the topic. All in all, I think that this is a well-written poem that is also fun to read. Also, I like the image you chose for this one.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Dear May 1, Thank you for your compliments and review.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this poem about growing up with terrible vision and suffering because of it. I hate it when people act that way. Thanks for turning it around and encouraging other people with your creativity and service. Bill
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
Thanks for sharing this poem about growing up with terrible vision and suffering because of it. I hate it when people act that way. Thanks for turning it around and encouraging other people with your creativity and service. Bill
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review.