Reviews from

Blind as a Bat

20/20 vision poetry contest

4 total reviews 
Comment from w.j.debi
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Thank goodness for the advances in vision surgery that allow people to regain their vision and enjoy the sights around them. It sounds like you put up with a lot before it happened. I am happy to hear you can see so much better now.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Dear w.j.debi, Thank you for your review and good luck wishes.
Comment from zanya
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Wow what an interesting true story told first poetically and then additional notes at the end -the final line states it beautifully after the long vision journey - thanks for sharing this inspiring slice of life

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Dear zanya, Thank you for your comments and review and compliments.
Comment from May 1
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I really like this poem. It's quite an interesting approach to the topic. All in all, I think that this is a well-written poem that is also fun to read. Also, I like the image you chose for this one.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Dear May 1, Thank you for your compliments and review.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this poem about growing up with terrible vision and suffering because of it. I hate it when people act that way. Thanks for turning it around and encouraging other people with your creativity and service. Bill

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review.