Peace Returns
New freshness after a rain.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on rain, Peace Returns, has the right set up and allows that the aftermath of a great storm is often serene and calm.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This 5-7-5 on rain, Peace Returns, has the right set up and allows that the aftermath of a great storm is often serene and calm.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your read and comment.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery paints a
vivid word picture of the scene.
-Effective alliteration and
color imagery, as well.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery paints a
vivid word picture of the scene.
-Effective alliteration and
color imagery, as well.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from zlp22
Great color and picture. I have always.loved looking at the clouds after the rain. Maybe a rainbow would appear. The sky and sun control our lives we cannot do anything to change that. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Great color and picture. I have always.loved looking at the clouds after the rain. Maybe a rainbow would appear. The sky and sun control our lives we cannot do anything to change that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and comments.
