Comment from Cybertron1986

Exceptional

This piece is intriguingly dark. It captures the reader's senses. The phrase, "frozen in dreaming torment" perfectly embodies the feel and fear of the darkest nightmares. Very well expressed as always!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020

:) thank you! They asked for nightmare and I gave them nightmare! Haha! Appreciate your feedback! xoxo

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Night Terror'
Is a 5-7-5 Nightmare Writing Prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks for this, good luck, and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky and I 1024

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020

Thank you! I?ve been absorbed by the horror genre which I never thought I?d be writing!

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear author, a finely written poem with an illustration that complements this entry to perfection! Where did you find such a hideously grim picture? At least I know where you got the inspiration for this post.
Keep writing.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020

Thank you! I got pic from Pinterest and had most written already, just tweaked it a little to really match the pic! Appreciate you took time to read!

reply by Suzanna Ray on 09-Jan-2020