Bim Bam BaBa Boo
A Rap Love Poem - enjoy11 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
Jerry, I hate rap but love your poem. Bim Bam BaBa Boo almost wants me
to get up and dance. Tolerance and understanding will get you through.
Good line.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Jerry, I hate rap but love your poem. Bim Bam BaBa Boo almost wants me
to get up and dance. Tolerance and understanding will get you through.
Good line.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thanks - I had a lot of fun writing this one - Jerry
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very lively, appealing love poem with good rhythm and rhyming. It conveys a powerful message about what it takes to make a relationship work: love, trust, dealing effectively with differences.
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This is a very lively, appealing love poem with good rhythm and rhyming. It conveys a powerful message about what it takes to make a relationship work: love, trust, dealing effectively with differences.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun live poem with mono rhyme. The author seems to like having fun in love relationships instead of taking it too serious and maybe mess it all up.
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A very well-written fun live poem with mono rhyme. The author seems to like having fun in love relationships instead of taking it too serious and maybe mess it all up.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Jerry. I'm absolutely certain this is the first rap love poem I've ever read. When I read your notes, I did feel the the beat. You expanded your writing skills with this one Jerry. Now you need to get some music to go with it. Good luck in the contest. :))) Robert
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hey Jerry. I'm absolutely certain this is the first rap love poem I've ever read. When I read your notes, I did feel the the beat. You expanded your writing skills with this one Jerry. Now you need to get some music to go with it. Good luck in the contest. :))) Robert
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
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You bet.
Comment from WildWithWords
This certainly is different. I'll give you that.
I've never been much of a rap fan but tried to look at this through unbiased eyes anyway. You deserve that. I found it simplistic however the message is clear and important which to me outweighs a lot of the other more cosmetic factors. I wish you luck.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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This certainly is different. I'll give you that.
I've never been much of a rap fan but tried to look at this through unbiased eyes anyway. You deserve that. I found it simplistic however the message is clear and important which to me outweighs a lot of the other more cosmetic factors. I wish you luck.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
Comment from Tina Crute
What a fun love poem with a beat! It reminds me that love is blind but that can be a good thing!
Some may never understand...that's life!
Very enjoyable!
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What a fun love poem with a beat! It reminds me that love is blind but that can be a good thing!
Some may never understand...that's life!
Very enjoyable!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
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For sure I did!
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I like the rhythm and fun of your repeating line, and the rhyming lines speak honest truth. A different kind o f poem. I like it. Good luck with your contest entry.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I like the rhythm and fun of your repeating line, and the rhyming lines speak honest truth. A different kind o f poem. I like it. Good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
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Yes, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jerome, I liked this poem with the Refrain at the beginning of the Couplet. I've never seen it like that here. Bim Bam Baba Boo... This is a sweet love poem from you :)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hi Jerome, I liked this poem with the Refrain at the beginning of the Couplet. I've never seen it like that here. Bim Bam Baba Boo... This is a sweet love poem from you :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Thank you - hope you had as much fun reading it as i had writing it - Jerry
Comment from Bill Pinder
It is unreadable. Please edit so it can be read. Thanks for sharing your creative writing. I'll try again later to see if I can read it. Nothing like a rap poem.
Bill
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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It is unreadable. Please edit so it can be read. Thanks for sharing your creative writing. I'll try again later to see if I can read it. Nothing like a rap poem.
Bill
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you please try again
Comment from RShipp
Glad you were able to fix it!
Enjoyed the read.
My favorite line: "Tolerance and understanding will get us through" ... but with my experience, if your true friends 'warn' you of moving forward in a relationship... they are usually right?
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Glad you were able to fix it!
Enjoyed the read.
My favorite line: "Tolerance and understanding will get us through" ... but with my experience, if your true friends 'warn' you of moving forward in a relationship... they are usually right?
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you - corrected - please try again
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Thanks for coming back, I recognize that was extra effort - Jerry
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No problem.
