Punchinello
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Punchinello Chapter Six"Terror strikes the Texas town of Astatula. Can She
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Comment from phil nelson
This was a random selection for review, but your skill at story telling has drawn me in to find out more of the story --I like the way you move around from character to character without losing the rhythm or intrigue that you are setting up. You also caught me short with a few words to now look up "kehua--kyphosis" and that's an enjoyable task--I look forward to learning more about Cody and the background
All the Best!
Phil
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This was a random selection for review, but your skill at story telling has drawn me in to find out more of the story --I like the way you move around from character to character without losing the rhythm or intrigue that you are setting up. You also caught me short with a few words to now look up "kehua--kyphosis" and that's an enjoyable task--I look forward to learning more about Cody and the background
All the Best!
Phil
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Welcome aboard. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
